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psychogist
28th Oct '07 Sun, 18:22
. . .no. . .music. . .just. . .words. . .

. . .I dont know why I push you back. . .
. . .I dont know why I let the pain stack. . .
. . .I'll tell you yeah it hurt so much. . .
. . .too bad though a diamond in the rough. . .
. . .I'll tell you "sorry" but what will that do??. . .
. . .I'm still not the one who you come home to. . .
. . .that night you cried and I watched in awe. . .
. . .deep inside I felt as I saw. . .
. . .you're tears fall down unto you're cheeks. . .
. . .made my stomach churn the pain reached the peak. . .
. . .I wanted to look away and just forget. . .
. . .that you cried and I didnt regret. . .
. . .but why in the world do I treat you this way??. . .
. . .please make it kick into you're mind like "hey". . .
. . ."maybe he still loves me that's why he's like that". . .
. . .but I know it isn't easy just looking back. . .
. . .you're now a lost cause that I'll keep coming to. . .
. . .but even after all these months I still wish too see you. . .
. . .so I just left that night leaving you all alone. . .
. . .though you called my name like we were on the phone. . .
. . .I pretended not to hear a single word you said. . .
. . .but I'll tell you the truth I still cry on my bed. . .

comments??. . . :noidea:
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vandike
4th Feb '08 Mon, 21:41
three cheers for depressing poems!! :wave:
what if we made a thread for poets?
it's the best we can do..

bummer..

psychogist
4th Feb '08 Mon, 21:46
:lol: tagal na nito ha. . .:slap:

hhhmmm. . .

may gumawa na ng ganun na thread ha. . .

yung Post your poems here. . .na thread. . .
:noidea:

ganun ba yung naiisip mo??

kurabo
5th Feb '08 Tue, 00:15
ayos toh ah..

@psychogist

salamat pala ulit sa Wierd Al huh:salute: