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jacajo
22nd Mar 2008, 00:01
PWC Week 2 Discussion Thread

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Post all your suggestion, comments and thought regarding on both the entry and the contest here.

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kisses
22nd Mar 2008, 11:13
kelan ang deadline?

jacajo
22nd Mar 2008, 16:54
kelan ang deadline?

March 28 po 12mn [Philippine time]

vandike
23rd Mar 2008, 03:13
woah, nauna ako..:p

jacajo
23rd Mar 2008, 03:19
woah, nauna ako..:p

Hehe medyo napahirap ata yung contest ang daming nagthanks pero isa pa lang ang nagpass ng entry... :lol:

leanbaula
23rd Mar 2008, 16:08
hala di ko po na centralized.. pa join po ahh...

jacajo
23rd Mar 2008, 16:45
hala di ko po na centralized.. pa join po ahh...

Paki center po yung poem and black color para mas easy on the eye...

Everyones welcome to join thankyou and goodluck!

arkhan_lyle
23rd Mar 2008, 18:12
poem making.. bago to ah.. ehehe

try ko rin gumawa ng entry.. kaso noob ako dito..
wag nyo sana pagtawanan ang magiging entry ko ehehe..
wala ako alam sa literary artworks.. ehehe

bro evil angel ba ang theme?
e di dapat about sa evil angel ang poem..

may 3 words din na dapat i-insert. gahh.. hirap ah...
e di dapat english lang kasi english yung 3 words.. bawal siguro tagalog kasi magiging taglish sya.. ehehe

try ko gumawa ngayon..

jacajo
23rd Mar 2008, 18:34
poem making.. bago to ah.. ehehe

try ko rin gumawa ng entry.. kaso noob ako dito..
wag nyo sana pagtawanan ang magiging entry ko ehehe..
wala ako alam sa literary artworks.. ehehe

bro evil angel ba ang theme?
e di dapat about sa evil angel ang poem..

may 3 words din na dapat i-insert. gahh.. hirap ah...
e di dapat english lang kasi english yung 3 words.. bawal siguro tagalog kasi magiging taglish sya.. ehehe

try ko gumawa ngayon..

Yup para sa mga writers at aspiring writers natin 'tong contest, Ngek alam mo bang based sa mga studies na ang tao ay poetic and artisic by nature anyway ako nga sumasali sa mga sig making contest kahit di pa ako ganong kagaling eh.

Yup Evil Angel yung theme actually dahil we are talking about poems maraming interpretation ang "evil angel" pwedeng literal, pwede ring figurative, so pwedeng ang ibig sabihin nya ay "Masamang Anghel", pwede ring "Magandang mapagpangap" so hindi nya bound yung literal meaning lang...

Eje medyo napahirap nga pero alam ko naman na people are up to the challenge, yup english lang muna dahil umpisa pa lang nitong contest nirelay ko lang yung general rule para sa mga upcoming pang mga contest...

Basta Aja! kaya yan!

Goodluck bro!

arkhan_lyle
23rd Mar 2008, 21:11
whoot! submitted my entry.. ehehe

damn friggin apples! ang hirap isingit..
arghh! i'll eat every single one of your kind.. hahaha! ill have my revenge on you apple! eheheh :rofl:

jacajo
23rd Mar 2008, 21:17
whoot! submitted my entry.. ehehe

damn friggin apples! ang hirap isingit..
arghh! i'll eat every single one of your kind.. hahaha! ill have my revenge on you apple! eheheh :rofl:

Great job! kitams!? kayang kaya pala eh!

enajyram14
23rd Mar 2008, 23:12
puede ko ba tagalugin yung girl, apple at cross... im planning to do a tagalog poem sana...

jacajo
23rd Mar 2008, 23:21
puede ko ba tagalugin yung girl, apple at cross... im planning to do a tagalog poem sana...

Hmmmm cencya na hindi po pwede, nabigay na yung mga rules and unfair na po sa first 3 na nagsubmit hope you understand... :)

-aiah-
24th Mar 2008, 00:22
sana tama... :sigh: i already post my entry... vampee, cno judge??? meron ba??? :giggle:

jacajo
24th Mar 2008, 01:13
sana tama... :sigh: i already post my entry... vampee, cno judge??? meron ba??? :giggle:

Goodluck!

Actually kayo at ibang members ang judge by votes idedetermine kung sino ang mananalo...

vandike
24th Mar 2008, 01:23
disqualify me.. i forgot may topic pala.. i just write what pops into my head, i don't think of a topic first, i just go with the flow..

pero ash, your topic........ T_T evil angel..? nasabay to sa March Madness naming writers..
hope this will not lead to confusion..

anyway, carry on with the poem of the week contest..
i hoped you asked my consent first..:whistle:

enajyram14
24th Mar 2008, 01:35
Hmmmm cencya na hindi po pwede, nabigay na yung mga rules and unfair na po sa first 3 na nagsubmit hope you understand... :)
ah, ok... anyway, i just submit my entry... sana tama at di sobra yung lines... gud luck sa lahat ng entries...

vandike
24th Mar 2008, 01:59
ah, ok... anyway, i just submit my entry... sana tama at di sobra yung lines... gud luck sa lahat ng entries...

salamat po sa entry.. check the colors, i think mali..

jacajo
24th Mar 2008, 02:05
disqualify me.. i forgot may topic pala.. i just write what pops into my head, i don't think of a topic first, i just go with the flow..

pero ash, your topic........ T_T evil angel..? nasabay to sa March Madness naming writers..
hope this will not lead to confusion..

anyway, carry on with the poem of the week contest..
i hoped you asked my consent first..:whistle:

Well the funny thing is, figuratively it goes with the topic i believe that the first two stanzas connect to the evil part and the later topics to the angel part...

Thats why I asked for updates sa writers discussion thread.i.. sensya na hbro...t

I think this would not cause confusion, lets just say warmup sainyo to... :salute:

vandike
24th Mar 2008, 02:15
Thats why I asked for updates sa writers discussion thread.i.. sensya na hbro...t


mukhang antok ka na.. :lol: no prob.. basta sumali ka din dun..

sana yung next topic ng potw, lang kinalaman sa breaking benjamin.. sa finger 11 naman.. :rofl:

jacajo
24th Mar 2008, 02:18
mukhang antok ka na.. :lol: no prob.. basta sumali ka din dun..

sana yung next topic ng potw, lang kinalaman sa breaking benjamin.. sa finger 11 naman.. :rofl:

Wa sige... maganda kasi yung irony nung "evil angel" anyway...

vandike
24th Mar 2008, 02:20
yeah.. but what's with the apples..?

Edit: cant i just change my poem, edit it, di tlga match sa topic eh.. :p kasi di din evil yung umpisa, nanghinayang lang sa relationships but no regrets, wait, ineexplain ko na tula ko ah..?! :lol:

jacajo
24th Mar 2008, 02:26
yeah.. but what's with the apples..?

Edit: cant i just change my poem, edit it, di tlga match sa topic eh.. :p kasi di din evil yung umpisa, nanghinayang lang sa relationships but no regrets, wait, ineexplain ko na tula ko ah..?! :lol:

Well it's your work... so if you feel na off topic sya... then edit it, kaso i feel na di edit ang mangyayari kundi complete revision :lol:

vandike
24th Mar 2008, 02:34
revision? eheheheheh.. bagong poem kamo! as in ang layo! :lol:
geh logtu na ko.. :sleep:

ferofax
24th Mar 2008, 15:38
wii~~ my entry's up! i was away for a few days, kaya ngayon ko lang nakita ung thread. anyways, i hope its not too shabby, kasi mejo impromptu ung gawa ko, and sariwa pa sa utak ko ang Silmarillion ni Tolkien, hence the fantasy angle. hope you like it.

more power sa mga sasali! later strangers! :)

NmEmoniC
24th Mar 2008, 17:20
-The Contest is open for all symbianizers.
-The entry must be at least have 16 lines and must not exceed 32 lines.
-You may only choose between English or Filipino as the medium of writing [No taglish allowed]

The theme for this week is...

"Evil Angel"

and to make it more interesting, these 3 words must appear in the poem:

1.Apple/Apples
2.Cross
3.Girl/Girls




wait nakalagay no taglish aloud pero kapag pinili mo na magsulat ng tagalog na tula at isisingit ang tatlong salitang iyon hindi ba matatawag na taglish un...

kung tagalog po ang pipiliin magiging mansanas po ba ang apple?
ang cross ay maaring krus? o ung landas na nagkrus?

ung girls babae po ba?


tanong lang pero ill try na mag english hahahaha...

jacajo
24th Mar 2008, 17:25
wii~~ my entry's up! i was away for a few days, kaya ngayon ko lang nakita ung thread. anyways, i hope its not too shabby, kasi mejo impromptu ung gawa ko, and sariwa pa sa utak ko ang Silmarillion ni Tolkien, hence the fantasy angle. hope you like it.

more power sa mga sasali! later strangers! :)

Fantasy fanatic ka pala bro? anyway thank for visiting the thread!


wait nakalagay no taglish aloud pero kapag pinili mo na magsulat ng tagalog na tula at isisingit ang tatlong salitang iyon hindi ba matatawag na taglish un...

kung tagalog po ang pipiliin magiging mansanas po ba ang apple?
ang cross ay maaring krus? o ung landas na nagkrus?

ung girls babae po ba?


tanong lang pero ill try na mag english hahahaha...

:lol: sensya na mga bro, in general ko na kc nilagay yung rules eje... if ever na may magbalak na sundan tong contest kaya yun... anyway i'll fix it to avoid confusion... thanks!

And thank you for visiting the thread!

arkhan_lyle
24th Mar 2008, 23:22
astig ng entry ni bro ferofax..:thumbsup:
trip ko rin mga fantasy and medieval type novels.. ehehe

ferofax
25th Mar 2008, 12:57
Fantasy fanatic ka pala bro? anyway thank for visiting the thread!

no problem dude. if its a good thread, you'll see me there lurking. if its really good, you'll see my posts. :) if its hot, you'll see me ranting!! gyahahaha~

kaya lang mejo stumped pako sa March Madness ni sir vandike... hmm. Happy Horse comes to mind though. yep, that retard lookin horse that's smiling at me... im thinking maybe the devil should smile right back. :D

ingeniousthinker
25th Mar 2008, 14:22
woot...woot.. kaya nyo yan... go-go-go...:beat:

grounded
26th Mar 2008, 18:03
di naman po talaga ako makata pero makikigulo lang....:)

subok lang ba...

ahihi:lol:

jacajo
26th Mar 2008, 18:13
di naman po talaga ako makata pero makikigulo lang....:)

subok lang ba...

ahihi:lol:

Di naman kailangan na makata ka para makapaginspire di ba?

Basta ang importante you tried

Goodluck bro!

grounded
26th Mar 2008, 20:33
salamat po!:)

leanbaula
27th Mar 2008, 13:37
ask ko lng kung mukhng evil angel ung theme ko kasi po kung hinde pa edit po sana^^
hehe
TY

jacajo
27th Mar 2008, 14:05
ask ko lng kung mukhng evil angel ung theme ko kasi po kung hinde pa edit po sana^^
hehe
TY

Sensya na bro cant answer your question... it's a form of coaching pag sinabi ko... basta kung pano mo naintindihan ang theme...

NmEmoniC
29th Mar 2008, 16:00
buti na lang umabot ug sa akin. grabe. nakalimutan ko ung date heheheh. nawala ako sa sked dahil sa enrolment na yan grrrr...


sana may tama ung ginawa ko hahaha. last minute na binuo eh pasensya na.

psychogist
29th Mar 2008, 16:41
wwaahh. . .di ako nakahabol :cry: :panic:

:upset: sayang. . .

hhaayy oh well sa next nalang ako sasali. . .:upset:

sino yung nanalo??

meron naba??

NmEmoniC
29th Mar 2008, 17:49
wwaahh. . .di ako nakahabol :cry: :panic:

:upset: sayang. . .

hhaayy oh well sa next nalang ako sasali. . .:upset:

sino yung nanalo??

meron naba??

wala pa april 4 pa daw makikita winner.
aun lang welcome back sigh

jacajo
29th Mar 2008, 18:27
Sa lahat po ng participants pwede po kayong bumoto as long as hindi yung work nyo ung ivovote nyo...

Magkakaroon po tayo ng PWC week 2 depende po sa result ng poll na nilagay ko sa voting thread...

Goodluck po sa mga participants!

Thanks sa sumusuporta ng contest...

rhope016
4th Apr 2008, 11:29
tanong ko lang po..yung sa PWC week 2..ano po yung frost??:help:

vandie
4th Apr 2008, 12:01
Frost is a solid deposition of water vapor from saturated air. It is formed when solid surfaces are cooled to below the dew point of the adjacent air.[1] Frost crystals' size differ depending on time and water vapor available. Frost is also usually translucent in appearance. There are many types of frost, such as radiation and window frost. Frost causes economic damage when it destroys plants or hanging fruits. It can also damage road surfaces through a process known as frost heaving.

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rhope016
5th Apr 2008, 20:31
:thanks:kuya van..kala ko kung ano weh..:giggle:

enajyram14
7th Apr 2008, 00:35
san kaya mas maganda sumali? sa short story o sa poem contest? :think: argh, ang hirap magdecide parehong exciting...

jacajo
7th Apr 2008, 00:57
san kaya mas maganda sumali? sa short story o sa poem contest? :think: argh, ang hirap magdecide parehong exciting...

Kung nahihirapan kang magdecide sali ka na muna da poem contest then sa story dahil whole month naman yun eh :p

rhope016
8th Apr 2008, 20:42
:alright: nakapag post na ko ng entry ko..:D

psychogist
9th Apr 2008, 00:33
wooh nasubmit ko na entry ko :excited:

hehehe :hat: sa mga nagpasa. . .

good luck saatin lahat. . .

jacajo
9th Apr 2008, 00:59
Hehe saling pusa ako :lol: cant resist the theme... and frost

psychogist
9th Apr 2008, 01:18
:giggle: kasali na si asher :clap:

:excited: again good luck saatin guys :yipee:

nag enjoy ako sa pagawa for this theme. . .

twilight
9th Apr 2008, 01:26
:hello: goodluck po sa inyong lahat..

Rachiersh
9th Apr 2008, 10:57
:cry: hindi pa ak0 nakakasali ah :slap:

can't c0ncentrate sa hauz :slap:

sa gym din :slap: :lol: dami kasing vitamins :lol:

:off: na pala ak0 :lol: :clap: go0dluck sa iny0 :D

vandie
9th Apr 2008, 14:36
yeah, cool theme, cool naka-isip toink... :slap: :lmao:
nagbabasa kasi ako nanaman ng mga robert frosts kasi.. :punish: tpos nakita ko grave nya.. :slap: anyway, goodluck sa ating lahat!

nag-submit na ko, my first POTW :lmao: as vandie.. :punish: :lmao:
i mixed in some vintage robert roth :lol: gloomy depressing tradegic <--coined word :lmao: story.. :lol: enjoy..:D

EDIT: I needed to add vulgar words for the emotion of poem

ferofax
9th Apr 2008, 18:03
wii~ galing. nabasa ko na ung mga posts, and i'd say i like Psychogist's and Asher's entries... galing. :praise: :clap:

vandie
9th Apr 2008, 23:08
yeah, on some writers you can see them trademarks.. it's not a battle of skills anymore, it's just plain for the readers..:D sana magenjoy mga boboto.. :rock:

HigherThanNorth
10th Apr 2008, 15:22
ayan...

ermm..

ulitin ko, komento nyo lang masaya na ko..

mas maigi nang magkoment ng kahit ano kesa wala.. hehehe.. salamat..

alam nyo na kung bakit gusto ko komento..

hehee..

HigherThanNorth
10th Apr 2008, 15:22
nga tamang buzzer beater.. one day before.. hehehe..

vandie
10th Apr 2008, 16:38
thanks sa pagsali higherthannorth!!! sana every week na tayo mag-participate! nice poem by the way.. :alright:

ferofax
10th Apr 2008, 19:16
...hmm. i like prose. good one, higherthan north. :)

jacajo
10th Apr 2008, 20:23
HTN (HigherThanNorth) bro thanks for joining... Nice one :p

rhope016
10th Apr 2008, 21:23
:salute: galing ng mga poem niyo ah..:clap:

darkbox
11th Apr 2008, 15:34
GALING ahh heheh wala 2loy pumasok sa utak ko hhe:slap:

vandie
17th Apr 2008, 15:18
CONGRATZ to the winner of POTW#2
Entry # 3 Reply to Robert Frost “Fire and Ice”

Congratz leanbula!!

:wave: :wave:
:salute: :salute: :salute:

jacajo
17th Apr 2008, 19:42
Congratz lean... reminder lang po sa lahat please be careful in criticizing the works... this is not like other arts like sig making or photo contest... contestants here are more sensitive than those of the other contest mention, why? because aside from the emotional connection of the poet/writer to his/her works he/she is the only one who can fully understand his/her works...

So please be careful in criticizing. :p

azumich
5th May 2008, 22:12
congrats po ....

muah muah ....

musa07
12th May 2008, 10:50
pano ba sumali???hehehe

celestial_soul
13th May 2008, 20:49
congrats!!!!:congratulations:

iceicebaby03
14th May 2008, 14:09
wala po bang bagong contest???hehe

jacajo
14th May 2008, 15:17
Pinagpaplanuhan pa lang yung next contest... watchout na lang po we'll inform you na lang via pm. :p