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29th Mar '08 Sat, 00:34
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1.Apple/Apples
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Entries
Entry No. 1
Confusions
Darkness and Light, where do we belong,
What makes a human right or wrong?
Before Eve’s was been deceived,
Are we destined to eat the apple and live?
An Angel there was crowned as a devil,
But the truth is there is no evil,
He concludes that “Too much light can blind you”,
And speak “Let darkness show you what to do”.
Love and despair, where is the cross lair?
Is He benevolent enough to care?
His power and intelligence to pursue,
Legitimacy of authority is a universal issue.
The girl and the serpent was once walked the light,
But they repent and start a legendary fight.
When does this fight must end?
When one must learns to comprehend?
The doctrine of truth has vague our intellect,
Stands and have courage to understand.
Think now, think once, think wise……
Darkness and Light, where do we belong,
What makes a human right or wrong?
Entry no. 2
The Evil Angel
In a long forgotten past..
A place where happiness will forever last
Where faeries, angels and winglies fly
The grass is green beneath the clear blue sky
A girl, with beauty unmatched in every angle
In love with an angel who’s strong and brave
Hidden loved by another, and now caught in a triangle
A possessive love as deep as a grave
An angel once was true to his oath
Booted out of the heavens by those who loathe
Others consumed by jealousy and conspiracy
Drop him down to earth with such tenacity
Now the angel betrayed by his own kind
Anguish and hatred filled his mind
Crushed the cross within his hand
And bit the apple forbidden in the land..
Entry No. 3
Sweet Scented Breath
Scattered pictures on my bed
Your words kept banging on my head
Last night we had was untamed and savage
But you fool me, now taste my sweet revenge
Go bite the apple and fall on my trick
Poison by my kisses until you’ll get sick
Seeing my faces every corner of your room
Climb up over you suddenly like thunder in the storm
Love the pain as you carry the cross
Grip the thorn of this black red rose
Stare at me as I bite my lips
Don’t dare to touch even my fingertips
I’m just an ordinary girl that bleeds
A puffball that’s willing to give all your needs
The two of us doesn’t need faith since we’re through
So I’ll leave you with sweet scented breath and go…
Entry No. 4
The Other Woman
I destroy homes, i tear families apart
I take all the boys, but that just the start
I'm more valued than diamonds,
more precious than gold
The sorrow I bring is a sight to behold
If you need me, I'm easily found
Im in a place, they called HEAVEN,
just across the street.
I have many names but
one you'll remember till death.
My name is EVIL ANGEL,
a girl with awesome power
Come to me, let us bite the apple.
Try me and see
But if you do you'll may never break free
Try me once and I might let you go
Try me twice and I've got your soul;
When I get control you will steal and you'll lie
And you will do what it takes just to have me
The crimes you commit for my charms
Are worth all the pleasure you'll find in my arms.
I'll be with you always right by your side,
You'll give up everything, your family and home
And soon, you'll regret you tried me, they always do
But you came to me, not I to you
You could have said NO and just walked away
If you could live it all over now, what would you say?
Now that we've met, what will you do?
Still wanna try me? Its up to you
I can show you such misery,
I can show you such strife
Come take my hand, let me ruin your life...
Entry No. 5
Ferofax
He walks the path 'tween here and there,
where battles fought, for right to bear,
where standards borne with fiery eyes,
shook earth and torn asunder skies.
When fields are rife with maiden blood,
of boys and girls and innocents;
He fought with mighty spear and sword,
and scale and shield and mount immense.
Of angels and men, and beasts among,
fought demons bent on raising hell;
He rode and smashed against the throng,
and crushed afoot the demons fell.
'Cross fields and skies the battle raged,
angels good and fallen clashed;
Far below among the caged,
a warrior fell, his hopes were dashed.
Felhounds surround, and demonbrutes,
she fought in vain but valiantly;
Maddened by her loss, he slew
and killed so fast that none could flee.
Among the dead her body bled,
he laid his hands beside and wept;
As love and life and reason fled,
her apple-brooch and cloak he kept.
And now among these killing fields,
a specter dark and brooding roamed;
He wields a wicked sword and spear,
and guards a grave, a mound, his home.
Beware to those who wander there,
lest they be found by him and slain;
An apple-brooch and cloak he wears,
Ferofax was once his name.
Enrty No. 6
Hitch
How can I love that an angel that evil?
so selfish, so boastful, so mean, so cruel.
Where all she want in life is to mingle,
to flirt, to hug and to kiss her.
But what the hell am I thinkin'
that girl so white
with no flaws
a coke figure, waiting for an approach.
So I walked in in her life,
knocked in in her heart.
Lucky enough to land a frontseat
but later I knew I was invoked on a hotseat.
Sins started to flourish
when I kissed that apple.
Her fiery lips had folded
while her soul unfold.
My eyes widened when I saw her bold being.
Anguish wrecking on the outside,
bleeding in the inside.
A virgin wild flower, waiting to be unthorned....behold!
And then she stretched wide open
and her arms pushed me in.
I felt her from the inside,
where nobody had reached in.
A girl with thousand faces
shadowed by hale grief.
Not too shallow, too narrow
eclipsed by her own hollow.
I'll bend my knee and lean forward.
Here's my back, hitch a ride.
"Carry your cross", a priest once preached.
I'll carry you and yours, more than willing.
Entry No. 7
Evil Angel
I hear voices around me
each of them questioning my identity
they often pretend to know me
scattering rumors about who am I
they say I'm pretty
they say I'm lovely
they say I'm the apple of their eyes
which quite flatters me
they love to stare at me
the boys go crazy after me
I'm an angel to their eyes
and they're my only prey
I'm the kind of girl
whom at first you'll love
but when time comes
I'll ruin your life and be a cross whom you'll carry around
yes,I'm that kind of girl
boys call me a heartbreaker
they'll curse me for making them cry
the word revenge they will try
some call me their honey
not knowing how cruel am I
others call me their evil angel
and that's really who am I
Entry No. 8
Vanguard
(avant-garde)
I am evil
that's how they see me
an outcast more like tragedy
I'll find no one made to love and care for me
always treated as the biggest curse
bringing chaos and disgrace
I'm the perfect mistake God ever created
and so no one would dare, I will never be wanted
and so I travel on
lost in this dark wide smoke
I'm the only person in this black parade I call
it's like a silent walk -- into my grave
I kept looking for the light
but it's not what I just found
I'm not sure if this is right
coz' I see a girl who dared to cross my path
she stepped into my world
and made me realize my worth
as if she cleansed my soul
and now I feel reborn
she sees me as no rotten apple
she believes I'm so much more
she gave me love that I don't have before
and so my life's not that bad at all
I'm a sinner, I'm no saint
yet she believes I'm her guardian angel
I'll protect her with all my heart
and be her strongest avant-garde
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Disqualified Entry
Pendants In Half
One million kisses touched my lips,
Bitten tongue, caressed fingertips..
Many girls have walked through my way,
Rose my sun, brightened up my day..
But some good things come to an end,
I'll never forget, though i mend..
One million tears fell from my eyes,
Melted my make up, my disguise..
Then came the girl born to love me,
To end my pain and misery..
An apple that fell on my head,
Like Newton, something new, i'm led..
You crossed my way, you gave your hand,
Helped me up, and taught me to stand..
Sir Isaac found gravity,
I found lovely serenity..
I love her one million times more,
In one million ways to adore..
In her, i have found my new life,
She is my better half, my wife..�
Reason: Disabled Account/Not Related to the theme
Vote for what you think is the best entry...
Newly registered members from March 25, 2008 are not allowed to vote...
Unexplained votes will not be counted...
You may use this criteria as a guide in voting:
-Structure of the poem
-Content and relativity to the theme "Evil Angel"
-Use of the added words:
1.Apple/Apples
2.Cross
3.Girl/Girls
-Genre
Voting for your own entry is not allowed!
Voting Closes April 4 at exactly 12mn Philippine time.
----------------------------------------------------------
Entries
Entry No. 1
Confusions
Darkness and Light, where do we belong,
What makes a human right or wrong?
Before Eve’s was been deceived,
Are we destined to eat the apple and live?
An Angel there was crowned as a devil,
But the truth is there is no evil,
He concludes that “Too much light can blind you”,
And speak “Let darkness show you what to do”.
Love and despair, where is the cross lair?
Is He benevolent enough to care?
His power and intelligence to pursue,
Legitimacy of authority is a universal issue.
The girl and the serpent was once walked the light,
But they repent and start a legendary fight.
When does this fight must end?
When one must learns to comprehend?
The doctrine of truth has vague our intellect,
Stands and have courage to understand.
Think now, think once, think wise……
Darkness and Light, where do we belong,
What makes a human right or wrong?
Entry no. 2
The Evil Angel
In a long forgotten past..
A place where happiness will forever last
Where faeries, angels and winglies fly
The grass is green beneath the clear blue sky
A girl, with beauty unmatched in every angle
In love with an angel who’s strong and brave
Hidden loved by another, and now caught in a triangle
A possessive love as deep as a grave
An angel once was true to his oath
Booted out of the heavens by those who loathe
Others consumed by jealousy and conspiracy
Drop him down to earth with such tenacity
Now the angel betrayed by his own kind
Anguish and hatred filled his mind
Crushed the cross within his hand
And bit the apple forbidden in the land..
Entry No. 3
Sweet Scented Breath
Scattered pictures on my bed
Your words kept banging on my head
Last night we had was untamed and savage
But you fool me, now taste my sweet revenge
Go bite the apple and fall on my trick
Poison by my kisses until you’ll get sick
Seeing my faces every corner of your room
Climb up over you suddenly like thunder in the storm
Love the pain as you carry the cross
Grip the thorn of this black red rose
Stare at me as I bite my lips
Don’t dare to touch even my fingertips
I’m just an ordinary girl that bleeds
A puffball that’s willing to give all your needs
The two of us doesn’t need faith since we’re through
So I’ll leave you with sweet scented breath and go…
Entry No. 4
The Other Woman
I destroy homes, i tear families apart
I take all the boys, but that just the start
I'm more valued than diamonds,
more precious than gold
The sorrow I bring is a sight to behold
If you need me, I'm easily found
Im in a place, they called HEAVEN,
just across the street.
I have many names but
one you'll remember till death.
My name is EVIL ANGEL,
a girl with awesome power
Come to me, let us bite the apple.
Try me and see
But if you do you'll may never break free
Try me once and I might let you go
Try me twice and I've got your soul;
When I get control you will steal and you'll lie
And you will do what it takes just to have me
The crimes you commit for my charms
Are worth all the pleasure you'll find in my arms.
I'll be with you always right by your side,
You'll give up everything, your family and home
And soon, you'll regret you tried me, they always do
But you came to me, not I to you
You could have said NO and just walked away
If you could live it all over now, what would you say?
Now that we've met, what will you do?
Still wanna try me? Its up to you
I can show you such misery,
I can show you such strife
Come take my hand, let me ruin your life...
Entry No. 5
Ferofax
He walks the path 'tween here and there,
where battles fought, for right to bear,
where standards borne with fiery eyes,
shook earth and torn asunder skies.
When fields are rife with maiden blood,
of boys and girls and innocents;
He fought with mighty spear and sword,
and scale and shield and mount immense.
Of angels and men, and beasts among,
fought demons bent on raising hell;
He rode and smashed against the throng,
and crushed afoot the demons fell.
'Cross fields and skies the battle raged,
angels good and fallen clashed;
Far below among the caged,
a warrior fell, his hopes were dashed.
Felhounds surround, and demonbrutes,
she fought in vain but valiantly;
Maddened by her loss, he slew
and killed so fast that none could flee.
Among the dead her body bled,
he laid his hands beside and wept;
As love and life and reason fled,
her apple-brooch and cloak he kept.
And now among these killing fields,
a specter dark and brooding roamed;
He wields a wicked sword and spear,
and guards a grave, a mound, his home.
Beware to those who wander there,
lest they be found by him and slain;
An apple-brooch and cloak he wears,
Ferofax was once his name.
Enrty No. 6
Hitch
How can I love that an angel that evil?
so selfish, so boastful, so mean, so cruel.
Where all she want in life is to mingle,
to flirt, to hug and to kiss her.
But what the hell am I thinkin'
that girl so white
with no flaws
a coke figure, waiting for an approach.
So I walked in in her life,
knocked in in her heart.
Lucky enough to land a frontseat
but later I knew I was invoked on a hotseat.
Sins started to flourish
when I kissed that apple.
Her fiery lips had folded
while her soul unfold.
My eyes widened when I saw her bold being.
Anguish wrecking on the outside,
bleeding in the inside.
A virgin wild flower, waiting to be unthorned....behold!
And then she stretched wide open
and her arms pushed me in.
I felt her from the inside,
where nobody had reached in.
A girl with thousand faces
shadowed by hale grief.
Not too shallow, too narrow
eclipsed by her own hollow.
I'll bend my knee and lean forward.
Here's my back, hitch a ride.
"Carry your cross", a priest once preached.
I'll carry you and yours, more than willing.
Entry No. 7
Evil Angel
I hear voices around me
each of them questioning my identity
they often pretend to know me
scattering rumors about who am I
they say I'm pretty
they say I'm lovely
they say I'm the apple of their eyes
which quite flatters me
they love to stare at me
the boys go crazy after me
I'm an angel to their eyes
and they're my only prey
I'm the kind of girl
whom at first you'll love
but when time comes
I'll ruin your life and be a cross whom you'll carry around
yes,I'm that kind of girl
boys call me a heartbreaker
they'll curse me for making them cry
the word revenge they will try
some call me their honey
not knowing how cruel am I
others call me their evil angel
and that's really who am I
Entry No. 8
Vanguard
(avant-garde)
I am evil
that's how they see me
an outcast more like tragedy
I'll find no one made to love and care for me
always treated as the biggest curse
bringing chaos and disgrace
I'm the perfect mistake God ever created
and so no one would dare, I will never be wanted
and so I travel on
lost in this dark wide smoke
I'm the only person in this black parade I call
it's like a silent walk -- into my grave
I kept looking for the light
but it's not what I just found
I'm not sure if this is right
coz' I see a girl who dared to cross my path
she stepped into my world
and made me realize my worth
as if she cleansed my soul
and now I feel reborn
she sees me as no rotten apple
she believes I'm so much more
she gave me love that I don't have before
and so my life's not that bad at all
I'm a sinner, I'm no saint
yet she believes I'm her guardian angel
I'll protect her with all my heart
and be her strongest avant-garde
----------------------------------------------------------
Disqualified Entry
Pendants In Half
One million kisses touched my lips,
Bitten tongue, caressed fingertips..
Many girls have walked through my way,
Rose my sun, brightened up my day..
But some good things come to an end,
I'll never forget, though i mend..
One million tears fell from my eyes,
Melted my make up, my disguise..
Then came the girl born to love me,
To end my pain and misery..
An apple that fell on my head,
Like Newton, something new, i'm led..
You crossed my way, you gave your hand,
Helped me up, and taught me to stand..
Sir Isaac found gravity,
I found lovely serenity..
I love her one million times more,
In one million ways to adore..
In her, i have found my new life,
She is my better half, my wife..�
Reason: Disabled Account/Not Related to the theme