View Full Version : I am Sarah ..... I am but Three (by algieliza may naynay)


niKkay
21st May '07 Mon, 01:35
My name is Sarah
I am but three,
My eyes are swollen
I cannot see,
I must be stupid
I must be bad,
What else could have made
My daddy so mad?
I wish I were better
I wish I weren't ugly,
Then maybe my mommy
Would still want to hug me.
I can't speak at all
I can't do a wrong
Or else I'm locked up
All the day long.
When I awake I'm all alone
The house is dark
My folks aren't home
When my mommy does come
I'll try and be nice,
So maybe I'll get just
One whipping tonight.
Don't make a sound!
I just heard a car
My daddy is back
>From Charlie's Bar.
I hear him curse
My name he calls
I press myself
Against the wall
I try and hide
>From his evil eyes
I'm so afraid now
I'm starting to cry
He finds me weeping
He shouts ugly words,
He says its my fault
That he suffers at work.
He slaps me and hits me
And yells at me more,
I finally get free
And I run for the door.
He's already locked it
And I start to bawl,
He takes me and throws me
Against the hard wall.
I fall to the floor
With my bones nearly broken,
And my daddy continues
With more bad words spoken.
"I'm sorry!", I scream
But its now much too late
His face has been twisted
Into unimaginable hate
The hurt and the pain
Again and again
Oh please God, have mercy!
Oh please let it end!
And he finally stops
And heads for the door,
Whil! e I lay there motionless
Sprawled on the floor
My name is Sarah
And I am but three,
Tonight my daddy
Murdered me.

Lovely Face
10th Jun '07 Sun, 04:51
Ang lupit naman nito. Parang Edgar Allan Poe ang dating ng tula or Alfred Hitchcock kaya.....

Parang madilim ang eksena at kumikidlat kidlat pa.

niKkay
10th Jun '07 Sun, 04:58
Ang lupit naman nito. Parang Edgar Allan Poe ang dating ng tula or Alfred Hitchcock kaya.....

Parang madilim ang eksena at kumikidlat kidlat pa.

:giggle: ako nga eh natakot nung matapos ko tong basahin.. :sabog:

Lovely Face
10th Jun '07 Sun, 05:11
:giggle: ako nga eh natakot nung matapos ko tong basahin.. :sabog:

May kinalaman ba to sa totoong buhay?

Mas nakakatakot yung nabasa ko.....

Binalatan ng buhay ng lalaki yung ka date niya sa sobrang galit niya sa mga tao.

Bakit di snabi kung ano dahilan galit na galit siya sa anak niya???Alamin mo nga pls

:wow:

niKkay
11th Jun '07 Mon, 04:14
May kinalaman ba to sa totoong buhay?

Mas nakakatakot yung nabasa ko.....

Binalatan ng buhay ng lalaki yung ka date niya sa sobrang galit niya sa mga tao.

Bakit di snabi kung ano dahilan galit na galit siya sa anak niya???Alamin mo nga pls

:wow:


dahil sa pangit siya? :noidea:

margaux_sofya
11th Jun '07 Mon, 07:21
yun talaga yung title?

hindi ba a lilttle girl's cry? or a lil girl weeps?

medyo masakit sa ulo yung construction nung title eh.

niKkay
12th Jun '07 Tue, 03:51
yun talaga yung title?

hindi ba a lilttle girl's cry? or a lil girl weeps?

medyo masakit sa ulo yung construction nung title eh.


naku di ko rin alam e.. yan po kasi yung tinext sakin na title, kasi ask ko friend ko bout jan, pulot nia rin lang..:)

dazed_confused
4th Jul '07 Wed, 01:23
hmm..may dating ang story...yung title, prang di nga angkop...huh??...hehe okey...anu kaya kung palitan natin...suggestion lang ba...???malay baka makahanap tayo dito ng mas bagay na title...ikaw na rin jhen pumili ng bagong title sa mga entries hehe...

sa akin ito: Sarah, but three... :(

niKkay
4th Jul '07 Wed, 15:00
hmm..may dating ang story...yung title, prang di nga angkop...huh??...hehe okey...anu kaya kung palitan natin...suggestion lang ba...???malay baka makahanap tayo dito ng mas bagay na title...ikaw na rin jhen pumili ng bagong title sa mga entries hehe...

sa akin ito: Sarah, but three... :(

cge na nga. buti napasyal ako uliut ahaha.. cge ititle ko yan kuya daze.. ahaha bY sarah, but three (by dazed_confused):lol
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aLgiE
4th Jul '07 Wed, 15:16
Opps, may i suggest?

I am Sarah ..... I am but Three
( a little girls cry)

:nice: jhen ....

niKkay
4th Jul '07 Wed, 15:18
Opps, may i suggest?

I am Sarah ..... I am but Three
( a little girls cry)

:nice: jhen ....

sige ppalitan ko na naman.. hahaha basta may mag suggest palitan ko ..:)

angie314
4th Jul '07 Wed, 15:31
gloomy naman nito..scary!!!!

niKkay
4th Jul '07 Wed, 15:32
gloomy naman nito..scary!!!!

uu nga ate natuwa nga ako nung natanggap ko yan thru txt

rhope016
26th Jul '07 Thu, 18:57
whew...kakatakot...

celestial_hunter
26th Jul '07 Thu, 20:44
Ouch hapdi nmn nito...