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dagupanice
13th Jul '08 Sun, 21:18
:welcome:

carlo claveria

dagupanice's original poems.. enjoy

i diwata (http://symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=665678&postcount=1)
ii apostles greed (http://www.symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=669344&postcount=2)
iii friendship level no. 3 (http://symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=665678&postcount=4)
iv still (http://symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=665678&postcount=5)
v changed (http://symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=681010&postcount=39)
vi the death song (http://symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=683327&postcount=45)
vii words without you (http://www.symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=689152&postcount=55)
viii so deep in love (http://www.symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=689154&postcount=56)
ix words don't rhyme (http://www.symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=689155&postcount=57)
x best (http://www.symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=689155&postcount=57)
xi angel of my heart (http://www.symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=689161&postcount=59)
xii last blood (http://www.symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=689171&postcount=60)
xiii heal the unforgiven (http://www.symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=689178&postcount=61)
xiv knight in shining armor (http://www.symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=689188&postcount=62)
xv the sword shall be (http://symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=689721&postcount=64)
xvi still 2 (http://symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=689732&postcount=65)
xvii angel in disguise (http://symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=689737&postcount=66)
xviii sorrow kept (http://symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=689744&postcount=67)
xix on an angel's eyes (http://symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=689756&postcount=69)
xx broken (http://symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=690865&postcount=73)
xxi deep thoughts of inspiration (http://symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=694959&postcount=83)
xxii baha (http://symbianize.com/showthread.php?t=69561)
xxiii shawarma (http://symbianize.com/showthread.php?t=69565)
xxiv undefined (http://symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=699908&postcount=111)
xxv eternity (http://www.symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=699908&postcount=111)
xxvi friendship level no. 4 (http://symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=704452&postcount=117)
xxvii friendship level no. 4.5 (http://www.symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=707278&postcount=125)
xxviii till i found you (http://www.symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=715580&postcount=148)
xxix i love you jesus (http://www.symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=720601&postcount=1)
xxx brokenoid (http://www.symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=723386&postcount=614)
xxxi challenge fate (http://www.symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=727104&postcount=190)
xxxii sleep (http://www.symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=768511&postcount=196)
xxxiii 4:37 (http://www.symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=867288&postcount=208)
xxxiv christmas gift no. 2 (http://symbianize.com/showpost.php?p=907400&postcount=210)

Diwata

i thought, i would see you tonight
as you fly by my window
but only stars could tell
as they formed a constellation to lead you
where i want you to go

i thought, i could see you in my dreams
where fantasies and realities meet
but now, only time could tell
as they formed a series of events
where you want me to go

this is the reflection of the night
where i could see in the mirror is you
but i have never seen your face before
not even the touch of your hands..

where are you?

dagupanice
15th Jul '08 Tue, 19:41
Apostles Greed

Time have tell how we started to meet
the dance we had
the songs we sing
It's like an impossible dream to share
where life unfolds
the moments passed

There's no way our friendship will fades
up to the stars
can you see it?
It was written there as the moon smiles
even we're a thousand miles
apart, i know you still care

This is once in a lifetime, a spark
that even fire cant burn
or the bond that will never worn
They say true friendships have happy endings
well, it doesn't have now
I'm giving you all my trusts

How could i not see the beauty of your mask
where you show kindness
where your fragile heart speaks
This is what you want, for people to believe in you
and yet you made people dumb
trusts and friendships broken

How pathetic..


all for the love of money..

br0ken0id
15th Jul '08 Tue, 20:53
:slap: bakit ba ganyan ang p0em m0 :cry:

:kilay: i hate userz!! :ranting:

:slap: c0nsider na rin y0ng mga adik :lmao:

:peace: in fairness nice :naughty:

dagupanice
16th Jul '08 Wed, 22:05
friendship level no. 3

Ever wonder how our paths meet
in this dipped life that's so sweet
Living in this world to the fullest
our friendship simply made it the best
I could see it in your eyes
those colorful butterflies
Swinging in the wind of cold breeze
as we enjoy life, this moment freezed
How i wish this would last long
in times we are weak, we must be strong
And when it's all said and done
we'll shine like the everlasting sun

Rainbows have always filled the air
to your smile and indescribable stare
And when hot cocoas are served during rain
the moments have passed, but hope is gain
Now you see with our precious heart
that our friendship is more than an art
Doubts and fears will come someday
but ther's the clouds, they'll lead the way
Ever will i be so much happy everyday
there's more than my world can say
Every treasured memories would be the same
thank you so much, because you came

dagupanice
16th Jul '08 Wed, 22:06
still

its been a long time..
i wanna hold you tight
and feel your heartbeat
but.. can you hear mine?

its the moment of our life
a picture perfect
yeah, it shouldn't be this way
not now, not forever

this is what you dreamt before
and i could see it in your eyes
our dreams fading away
our clouds turning gray

smile.. please smile..
let's lock these memories..
its time to go..
and let this frozen time move on..[/SIZE]

br0ken0id
16th Jul '08 Wed, 22:43
:D nice try dagupanice :smack:

:pacute: sana naman b0ut l0ve p0em m0 :giggle:

kasi l0ve k0ng bumasa ng p0ems na b0ut l0ve pag guy ang gagawa :blush:

:pacute: :giggle:

dagupanice
17th Jul '08 Thu, 05:18
ano ba ang love? hehe.. di ko pa na-experience kasi yun eh.. hehe.. lageng heart broken.. nyehehe..

sige i'll try ok?

daming thanks sa advice.. now i'm learning..

maria kristina
17th Jul '08 Thu, 19:01
:noidea: wat do u want to point through??
:lol: mapapanggap siya???:praise:

br0ken0id
17th Jul '08 Thu, 22:29
:furious:

kakaibang kaybigan ka rin an0!! :slap:

ak0 nga!!ni bestfriend k0..til P100 lang pwedeng utangin sakin :slap:

8k pa kaya :slap:

kaya next time :comfort: trust pe0ple..but d0n't believe them..

:alright: :D

maria kristina
18th Jul '08 Fri, 16:06
parang ganun na nga.. we're like bestfriends tapos umutang siya at she promise me to pay it back.. 8k un.. pero hindi na niya binalik.. kasi pinanghapi-hapi/ lakwatsa niya..

sa akin wala naman yun kaso hindi na siya namamansin.. lage na lang deadma..

ikaw ba? pagpapalit mo ba ung friendship mo sa pera?

yun yun.. hehe.. :salute:

but u treat her?? as ur bestfriend ryt??:noidea:

"when money speaks talaga...hmmm everybody listens???:upset:

kulit0108
18th Jul '08 Fri, 19:34
wow! mukang may bagong manunulat dito wah! makapag subscribe n nga^^

dagupanice
18th Jul '08 Fri, 22:54
but u treat her?? as ur bestfriend ryt??:noidea:

"when money speaks talaga...hmmm everybody listens???:upset:

yup.. bestfriend pero.. hmmm.. pera lang pala ang habol niya..

pera talaga.. hehe..

dagupanice
18th Jul '08 Fri, 22:56
wow! mukang may bagong manunulat dito wah! makapag subscribe n nga^^

wow.. maraming salamat po sir.. pero newbie lang po.. hehe..

:salute::salute::salute:

kulit0108
19th Jul '08 Sat, 08:25
ahahah pareho lng tayong newbie dito^^


wag mo na po ako isir kuya mas matanda kayo sakin^^


kelan ka lit gagawa ng poem?

dagupanice
19th Jul '08 Sat, 09:02
ahahah pareho lng tayong newbie dito^^


wag mo na po ako isir kuya mas matanda kayo sakin^^


kelan ka lit gagawa ng poem?

hehe.. may bago naman eh.. look at the 1st page.. hehe..

diwata?

ChInKyMeLiSsE08
19th Jul '08 Sat, 09:46
:no: trust once broken can never be retored as before :sigh:

dagupanice
19th Jul '08 Sat, 09:54
:no: trust once broken can never be retored as before :sigh:

iba po sa akin.. pwede po ibalik sa original.. madali naman po akong magforgive.. i leave no scars behind.. i only look at the future, not the past..

:excited::excited::excited:

br0ken0id
19th Jul '08 Sat, 11:02
iba po sa akin.. pwede po ibalik sa original.. madali naman po akong magforgive.. i leave no scars behind.. i only look at the future, not the past..

:excited::excited::excited:

:clap: :smack:




Diwata

i thought, i would see you tonight
as you fly by my window
but only stars could tell
as they formed a constellation to lead you
where i want you to go

i thought, i could see you in my dreams
where fantasies and realities meet
but now, only time could tell
as they formed a series of events
where you want me to go

this is the reflection of the night
where i could see in the mirror is you
but i have never seen your face before
not even the touch of your hands..

where are you?

an0ther :clap: :D

:think: ang bilis naman nating nagawa :giggle:

iniwan lang kita sandali..p0em na agad :what:

Edit: :approve: keep 0n believing that y0u have the ability :D

be 0ptimistic carl :smack:

dagupanice
19th Jul '08 Sat, 11:30
:clap: :smack:



an0ther :clap: :D

:think: ang bilis naman nating nagawa :giggle:

iniwan lang kita sandali..p0em na agad :what:

Edit: :approve: keep 0n believing that y0u have the ability :D

be 0ptimistic carl :smack:

wow.. maraming salamat pala sa pag-encourage.. hehe.. i rily don't know how much i can repay you sa lahat ng things na tinulong mo.. hehe..

:dance::dance::dance:

br0ken0id
19th Jul '08 Sat, 11:38
wow.. maraming salamat pala sa pag-encourage.. hehe.. i rily don't know how much i can repay you sa lahat ng things na tinulong mo.. hehe..

:dance::dance::dance:

:welcome: if y0u need my help.. :D d0n't f0rget t0 PM me :D

always 0pen ym k0 f0r y0u :

:pacute: :clap:

dagupanice
19th Jul '08 Sat, 11:47
:welcome: if y0u need my help.. :D d0n't f0rget t0 PM me :D

always 0pen ym k0 f0r y0u :

:pacute: :clap:

wow.. maraming salamat talaga.. swit naman.. hehe :yipee::yipee::yipee:

br0ken0id
19th Jul '08 Sat, 12:07
:slap: sa araw na t0 kaw ang 5th na nagsabing sweet ak0 :lmao:

hindi naman eh :lmao:

dagupanice
19th Jul '08 Sat, 12:09
hmmm.. bakit nga ba diwata?

its about a dream girl.. hehe..

a person na i've yearning to meet..

and its about fate..

will i and this girl meet?

take note: dream girl lang yan ha.. a person i've never met before..

sana nakarelate din kayo.. hehe..

br0ken0id
19th Jul '08 Sat, 12:32
:giggle: sinag0t na talaga nya :lol:

dagupanice
19th Jul '08 Sat, 12:48
:giggle: sinag0t na talaga nya :lol:



hehe.. by request ni brokenoid.. hehe..

:clap::clap::clap:

br0ken0id
19th Jul '08 Sat, 13:12
:blush: :thanks:

:smack: en0ugh na :D

next p0em please :D

dagupanice
19th Jul '08 Sat, 13:49
:blush: :thanks:

:smack: en0ugh na :D

next p0em please :D

ha? next poem? sige.. gawa ulit ako pag may tym.. hehe..

:salute::salute::salute:

kulit0108
19th Jul '08 Sat, 16:31
waw ang sweet nmn nila^^

br0ken0id
19th Jul '08 Sat, 16:38
kulit :punish: kaw ah :slap:

nagsisimula ka nanaman :guns:

kulit0108
19th Jul '08 Sat, 18:35
ate bakit?


wala naman akong sinasabing name wah :rofl:


my tinamaan ba? :peace: :rofl:

dagupanice
19th Jul '08 Sat, 20:58
hayzz.. tama na mga carloholics.. comment na lang kayo sa mga poems ko..

:weep::weep::weep:

br0ken0id
19th Jul '08 Sat, 23:20
:lmao: carl0h0lics :yuk:

:pacute: mas gust0 k0 y0ng diwata :giggle:

kulit0108
20th Jul '08 Sun, 07:43
ou nga agree ako^^ mas maganda yung diwata^^

dagupanice
20th Jul '08 Sun, 22:07
talaga? bakit naman diwata yung fave niyo? hehe..

dagupanice
20th Jul '08 Sun, 22:10
ok lang ba yung friendship level no. 3?

dagupanice
20th Jul '08 Sun, 22:35
new poem, out na..

4th poem: still (http://symbianize.com/showthread.php?t=66664)

dagupanice
22nd Jul '08 Tue, 09:58
changed


how did you know?
that this is the right time
for me to shine
for your world

i've never regret it
when you came into my life
this feeling
a sweet gift for me

you always stay here
wherever i go
with your guidance
through the whisper of your words

i wanna be with you
as long as you hold my hands
i'll cherish this new life
'coz i know i'll never be the same..

again..

when you are with me..

thank You Jesus..

kulit0108
22nd Jul '08 Tue, 18:26
wow! nice naman! religious ka?


ahehehe samen


puro ganyan ang makikita mo pag literature pinaguusapan! religious!

dagupanice
22nd Jul '08 Tue, 18:31
wow! nice naman! religious ka?


ahehehe samen


puro ganyan ang makikita mo pag literature pinaguusapan! religious!

hehe.. nop.. inspired lang kay God.. :excited::excited::excited:

Iyay
22nd Jul '08 Tue, 21:36
Shine!

dagupanice
22nd Jul '08 Tue, 21:50
Shine!

hmmm.. ms. friendship level no. 3.. glad your here.. hehe..

:excited::dance::excited:

Iyay
23rd Jul '08 Wed, 18:57
hmmm.. ms. friendship level no. 3.. glad your here.. hehe..

:excited::dance::excited:

haha. Thanks for inviting me. hehe :salute:

I'll expect more from you po. And, oh, I TOLD YOU SO. Mr. Gatorade, YOU GOT TALENT! haha.

Keep the fire burning for Him!

:approve::dance::approve:

dagupanice
23rd Jul '08 Wed, 19:02
the death song

life is fading, and i can hear you breathin'
the time is freezing, and i can't stop crying
the sun is so bright, but our moon's fadin'
i can hear the words, the song your singing

love has taught me to live, what life should be
then decades have past, my heart still belongs to you
you bring hope, and i know im ready
this last song, is dedicated for us two

and now i will sing

"i wanna spend the rest of my life
loving you with all of my heart,
but i know that our lives will not long
oh baby, i know this is a sad song

would you please lock me in your arms
just like those embraces years ago
when you are so sweet, i admit
im still in love with you like before

and if i have the chance to live for tomorrow,
i would still say i love you like day in our wedding
i would say "i do", for eternity
i would still be strong for the both us us..

and i know i would..

if i have you.. "





damn, im crying right now.. this is the first time i cry this year.. i miss my grandfather.. now my grandma is all alone.. :weep::weep::weep: when i read the impromptu poem from start to bottom, it made me cry.. honest.. in know its corny.. i didnt know this poem will remind me of my grandfather..

dagupanice
23rd Jul '08 Wed, 19:14
im ok na.. yey! :yipee::excited::yipee:

kulit0108
23rd Jul '08 Wed, 19:18
sino po yung si ate iyay?


waw nagrecruit xa! ahahah


ang saya naman!


dumadami na tayo dito :thumbsup: :salute:

dagupanice
23rd Jul '08 Wed, 19:26
sino po yung si ate iyay?


waw nagrecruit xa! ahahah


ang saya naman!


dumadami na tayo dito :thumbsup: :salute:

siya si frinedship level no. 3.. look at the poem closely.. makikita mo yung name niya doon.. :excited:

Iyay
23rd Jul '08 Wed, 19:28
Engr. Gatorade the Poet, are you sure you're okay na?

Hmm. If it would help you, I say it's okay to cry. Release it all out. I once read that boys don't cry. MEN do. :)

Anyway, it's good to know that you express yourself through poetry. Keep the poes coming all right?

God bless you! :yipee::clap::beat:

br0ken0id
23rd Jul '08 Wed, 23:31
Engr. Gatorade the Poet, are you sure you're okay na?

Hmm. If it would help you, I say it's okay to cry. Release it all out. I once read that boys don't cry. MEN do. :)

Anyway, it's good to know that you express yourself through poetry. Keep the poes coming all right?

God bless you! :yipee::clap::beat:

:pacute: tama nga naman si friend m0..COL [crying 0ut l0ud] :cry: ka para magiging 0kiez ka na :D

:lmao: :slap: huwag ka maniwala na b0ys d0n't cry :slap:

mga manhid lang y0n :slap:

basta pag kaylangan ka ulit carl..PM me :naughty:

:lmao:

dagupanice
24th Jul '08 Thu, 08:09
Engr. Gatorade the Poet, are you sure you're okay na?

Hmm. If it would help you, I say it's okay to cry. Release it all out. I once read that boys don't cry. MEN do. :)

Anyway, it's good to know that you express yourself through poetry. Keep the poes coming all right?

God bless you! :yipee::clap::beat:

wow.. maraming salamat friendship level no. 3.. hehe.. galing mo talaga.. hehe.. lage naman akong ok eh.. hehe..



:pacute: tama nga naman si friend m0..COL [crying 0ut l0ud] :cry: ka para magiging 0kiez ka na :D

:lmao: :slap: huwag ka maniwala na b0ys d0n't cry :slap:

mga manhid lang y0n :slap:

basta pag kaylangan ka ulit carl..PM me :naughty:

:lmao:



brokie, salamat din.. ur rily a good friend.. hindi ko nga alam kung paano talaga kita pasasalamatan simula sa 1st na nagmeet tayo..

hehe.. naalala ko pa, kulit ko sa pm ko noon.. hehe.. thanks!

:praise::salute::praise:

br0ken0id
24th Jul '08 Thu, 20:26
brokie, salamat din.. ur rily a good friend.. hindi ko nga alam kung paano talaga kita pasasalamatan simula sa 1st na nagmeet tayo..

hehe.. naalala ko pa, kulit ko sa pm ko noon.. hehe.. thanks!

:praise::salute::praise:

anytime pwede m0 ak0ng iPM :D

:smack: :thanks: for the compliment..

:pacute: make s0me m0re p0ems :D

dagupanice
24th Jul '08 Thu, 20:42
anytime pwede m0 ak0ng iPM :D

:smack: :thanks: for the compliment..

:pacute: make s0me m0re p0ems :D

hmmm.. kung di siguro ako naligaw sa quotes and poems dito sa symbi, hindi siguro ako gumagawa ng poems now.. hehe.. :excited::excited::excited:

basta thanks sa lahat.. :salute:

gawa ka rin ng bago brokie.. :dance::excited::dance:

we'll be waitin ok? :thumbsup:

kisses
27th Jul '08 Sun, 10:51
:panic: ngayon ko lang nalaman na may thread ka dito...hehehehehe :lol:

nice poems...keep it up and continue sharing

br0ken0id
27th Jul '08 Sun, 17:49
hmmm.. kung di siguro ako naligaw sa quotes and poems dito sa symbi, hindi siguro ako gumagawa ng poems now.. hehe.. :excited::excited::excited:

basta thanks sa lahat.. :salute:

gawa ka rin ng bago brokie.. :dance::excited::dance:

we'll be waitin ok? :thumbsup:

:thanks: :yes: i will :D kakatap0s k0 lang nga eh :D check it 0ut by y0urself :D

:panic: ngayon ko lang nalaman na may thread ka dito...hehehehehe :lol:

nice poems...keep it up and continue sharing

:punish: gumawa ka na rin ate :beh:

dagupanice
28th Jul '08 Mon, 00:21
:panic: ngayon ko lang nalaman na may thread ka dito...hehehehehe :lol:

nice poems...keep it up and continue sharing

wow.. maraming salamat po sa pag-encourage ma'am.. maraming salamat po.. sana po nagustuhan niyo mga poems.. :salute:



:thanks: :yes: i will :D kakatap0s k0 lang nga eh :D check it 0ut by y0urself :D


wow.. i'll check it out soon.. thanks.. maraming salamat din brokie.. :thumbsup:

dagupanice
28th Jul '08 Mon, 00:38
words without you

when i first saw you
i know that somehow
someway, there's a way
three words i can't say

when there are confusions
full of illusions
i don't know what to do
but to say i love you

words without you
is silence to me
words of wisdom
is be what you wanna be

love is hard to find
from where it starts
but i know it will keep us
together and forever

dagupanice
28th Jul '08 Mon, 00:42
so deep in love

come and take my hand
and i'll take you to a land
where i could whisper something
that my heart never brings
of clear words that so true
i meant to say i love you

i have things back for sorrow
of love to pack for tomorrow
and our journey will rise up again
on a spirit of a caring friend
but you made the clouds so blue
i meant to say i love you

you gave me life to which i adore
and have open the lights of heaven's door
whatever it takes, i'm still here
just believe in me, i'm near
you helped me reach the skies above
help me 'coz im so deep in love

dagupanice
28th Jul '08 Mon, 00:46
words don't rhyme

words flew away
well things are getting
stranger than everyday
the tears came by
the inspiration pass
and they never last
is it time to say goodbye?

when this feeling
cross a thousand ocean
you can't catch your breath
your last breath
when your heart stop to beat
and suddenly resuscitate
you can't take the heat
is it a checkmate?

you've never broke any
of your promising promises
well, you just did
is it love or forbid?
snows fall down
because there is a time
the spring will bloom
on a sharp-sighted moon
words don't rhyme

dagupanice
28th Jul '08 Mon, 00:51
best

you may not be an angel
'coz angel are so few
but until the day one comes along
i'll string along with you

look not in my eyes, for fear
they mirror the sight i see
and there you find your face too clear
and love it and be lost like me

let us roll our strength and all
our sweetness roll up into one ball

and tear our pleasure with rough strife
through the iron gates of life
thus, though we cannot make our sun
stand still, yet we will make it run

dagupanice
28th Jul '08 Mon, 00:55
angel of my heart

rainbow of cherub
heavens above our head
everlasting life
angel of my heart

we're friends together, remember?
fore go the lights of our past
that today we untreasured it
don't throw it all away

maybe the memories have disappeared
but they will still remain
'coz no one could replace
the angel that i loved forever

the moon shows its true phase
and love hide its true face
remember that i love you
angel of my heart

dagupanice
28th Jul '08 Mon, 01:05
Last Blood

I

when the first blood
drops to the ground
that i found
that things dont exist
around and everywhere
but my heart
still beats for you..
because of you
i feel the real
and reveal
that my love
is only for you

II

at the middle,
i hear the music
playing in your heart
lighting the dark side
of our dim memories
full of miseries
and mysteries
till day by day
how i wish to be
with you by my side
guiding and helping
me on my way

III

when the last blood
drops on my hand
that i realize that
i'm useful at the first
but useless at the last
and the last blood
is more important
than the first because
the last blood
could only be
YOU



> hmmm.. i think its a corny poem

dagupanice
28th Jul '08 Mon, 01:14
heal the unforgiven

life starting to fades away
running towards you back and forth
pain sorrounds around your body
you can't take it anymore

fears begin to fall
to your face, to your body
the hands of wind will take you
far and far away

and tears suddenly turns to blood
when it reaches your soul
and reminds me of your unworldly world
your memories disappear

through this dark night
all life, all souls arises
think of their loved ones
and drink sorrow's life

in a far away land
i sit down and cast my prayers
shower me with rain and lightning
and heal the unforgiven



> hehe.. another of my poem.. about my life before.. hmm.. worldly sorrow yan.. akala ko dati di na ako mafoforgive ni God.. haha

i dont want just my sins are forgiven, i also want to be healed.. :noidea:

:praise:

dagupanice
28th Jul '08 Mon, 01:20
the knight in shining armor

its time to rise
and open your eyes
look around and feel the presence
it's all in forbidden lies

pick up the shield and sword
to go and face the world
with full of joyful and sorrow
for i may not see tomorrow

i'll protect our frindship
through battle and hardship
when i lose hope
you whisper and gave me courage

i'll fight for our love
even with these wounds
praying to the Person above
its you, i always seek

its time to rise
pick up the shield and sword
i'll protect our friendship
and fight for our love



> hmmm.. i think this is one of the best poems i created ever.. hehe.. i'm a knight.. a dark knight.. but not a batman..

i'll defend and protect.. :samurai:

kulit0108
28th Jul '08 Mon, 06:57
wow!

astig mga poem mo kuya!

fave ko yung knigth in shining armor!

medyo nakakrelate ako^^

dagupanice
28th Jul '08 Mon, 13:54
the sword shall be..

the sword shall be my cross
in fighting through many battles
with warriors who have loss
and peace and sorrowful humbles

i have seen flesh and bloods
who pass away like floods
whose bounty is as stick as mud
all these creations of Our Almighty God

many lives have drifted away
through successful and unsuccessful war
all i can do is make a way
for i might never reach myself anymore

now its time to rest
when you have given all your bes
farewell to these lifeless legend
when my world come to my end

the sword shall be my cross
standing above me
through many lives that fall across
the end of an endless journey



> inspired from a classic movie "braveheart".. and the song " a warrior is a child".. promote tayo ng world peace.. :buddy:

dagupanice
28th Jul '08 Mon, 14:03
still 2

the way i look at your eyes
had made me realize
how much you mean to me
and how we can ever be

forever i will cherish
our memories that would never perish
they would always be in my mind
our memories that i could never leave behind

i felt this terrible pain in my heart
with the thought of us being apart
but i hope that you will never forget
the time we shared during the sunset

in just few weeks, i would be gone
and you would be again all alone
you know you are my bestfriend
and i shall never forget you till the end



> still 2.. ang katuluyan ng still 1.. :alright:

dagupanice
28th Jul '08 Mon, 14:09
angel in disguise

in a rosy-fingered dawn skies
i met an angel in disguise
for it is not a mid-summer night's dream
in days of loving heart-warming hymn

but these are unworldly games we play
every mornings of everyday
every nights of everyday
i know you are here for me to stay

in a rolling ball of fire
you gave me care and desire
don't know where you belong
but you're an angel i've waited for so long

i see love in your eyes
in your arms i'll not think twice
you're an angel in the skies
you're an angel in disguise



> hmmm.. i don't know but its clear.. that angels brought me here.. hehe.. don't know the tilte of the song..

dagupanice
28th Jul '08 Mon, 14:16
sorrow kept

there are things i want you to know
this feeling i can't show
to be with you on my side
with arms open wide

i dream about you
and hope it will come true
from the start i knew
that I LOVE YOU

you never let me down
from right to upside down
you play your funny sound
and wear that silly crown

from the time i'm weak
your love i always seek
for me, you are my land
where our journey begun



>hmmm.. i mostly pretend to be happy.. that's why sorrow kept.. pero now sanay na akong maging happy.. because before i always fake to be happy.. it helps me a lot.. :excited::excited::excited:

dagupanice
28th Jul '08 Mon, 14:24
wow!

astig mga poem mo kuya!

fave ko yung knigth in shining armor!

medyo nakakrelate ako^^

hey hey hey.. thanks din na marami.. hehe..

go knight in shining armor.. hehe..

:excited:

dagupanice
28th Jul '08 Mon, 14:25
on an angel's eyes

i cast a spell
on a wishing well
if only my dreams
could come true

i search the world
on its brighter side
and i found you
just along my side

we've spent time
until forever
how silly it was
we're joined together

dreams came true
as cold as ice
i see the world
on an angel's eyes



> wah.. simple and expressive poem.. its a poem of friendship,. sometimes, you don't have to go around and look for a friend.. they just simply come to your life.. thanks guys!

this is an instant classic poem.. haha.. :lol: :dance::excited:

:thanks: :comfort:

Iyay
28th Jul '08 Mon, 18:04
Wow! You're astounding! Grabe, ang dami po agad! Yeah! :excited::clap::excited:

Favorite ko rin yung knight in shining armor. haha. Ang galing! More, more, more! hehe:excited: :dance:

I AM SO RIGHT WHEN I TOLD YOU THAT YOU GOT TALENT! :lol: see yah! :salute:

br0ken0id
28th Jul '08 Mon, 20:27
:pacute: ei carl :slap:

hinay hinay lang..

:D :whistle: pay0ng kapatid :buddy:

reserve s0me p0ems f0r the next week.. :sigh:

sige ka :slap: baka mapareh0 ang thread m0 sa iba :giggle:

:D per0 nasasay0 pa rin ang decisi0n :D

:clap: by the way nice w0rks.. :approve:

i like the th0ught 0f s0rr0w kept :pacute:

:sigh:

dagupanice
29th Jul '08 Tue, 07:00
Wow! You're astounding! Grabe, ang dami po agad! Yeah! :excited::clap::excited:

Favorite ko rin yung knight in shining armor. haha. Ang galing! More, more, more! hehe:excited: :dance:

I AM SO RIGHT WHEN I TOLD YOU THAT YOU GOT TALENT! :lol: see yah! :salute:

ha? bakit knight in shining armor? hehe.. wala naman akong talent eh..

:pacute: ei carl :slap:

hinay hinay lang..

:D :whistle: pay0ng kapatid :buddy:

reserve s0me p0ems f0r the next week.. :sigh:

sige ka :slap: baka mapareh0 ang thread m0 sa iba :giggle:

:D per0 nasasay0 pa rin ang decisi0n :D

:clap: by the way nice w0rks.. :approve:

i like the th0ught 0f s0rr0w kept :pacute:

:sigh:

wah.. sorry.. parang na-gets ko na.. baka wala na akong ma-ilagay next week? :hat: ok.. i'll take your advice brokie.. :buddy:

maraming thanks.. :yipee::clap::beat::excited:

share ko lang mga yun.. hehe.. :buddy:

dagupanice
29th Jul '08 Tue, 07:15
broken

love.

unending happiness
between two souls.

i'm a puppet.
with my strings attached
in your hands.

freedom.
promises are scissors.

where is love?

Iyay
29th Jul '08 Tue, 18:33
Yea, you do. You can't deny it na po. haha. Come to think of it, tama nga naman po si ate Brokie. Bitinin niyo lang po kami. hahaha. Take care! :dance:

Iyay
29th Jul '08 Tue, 18:36
broken

love.

unending happiness
between two souls.

i'm a puppet.
with my strings attached
in your hands.

freedom.
promises are scissors.

where is love?


1 Corinthians 13. haha :lol:

dagupanice
29th Jul '08 Tue, 18:39
Yea, you do. You can't deny it na po. haha. Come to think of it, tama nga naman po si ate Brokie. Bitinin niyo lang po kami. hahaha. Take care! :dance:

baka this august matigil na pagpost ko.. i'll be back in manila na eh.. and i'll be busy that time for october board exams kasi doon na ako magrereview.. kaya binigay ko na lahat ng poems ko.. hehe..

i think enough na yang mga poems ko.. :noidea:

dagupanice
29th Jul '08 Tue, 18:40
1 Corinthians 13. haha :lol:

true love is like a half-naked man hanged in a tree half-naked and bleeding all over his body..

br0ken0id
29th Jul '08 Tue, 21:35
wah.. sorry.. parang na-gets ko na.. baka wala na akong ma-ilagay next week? :hat: ok.. i'll take your advice brokie.. :buddy:

maraming thanks.. :yipee::clap::beat::excited:

share ko lang mga yun.. hehe.. :buddy:

:giggle: buti naman at nakuha m0 y0ng p0int k0 :lmao:

kahit ak0 naguluhan eh :lmao:

hmm..cge p0st ever ka na.. :D

august is fast approaching :slap:

dagupanice
30th Jul '08 Wed, 04:54
:giggle: buti naman at nakuha m0 y0ng p0int k0 :lmao:

kahit ak0 naguluhan eh :lmao:

hmm..cge p0st ever ka na.. :D

august is fast approaching :slap:

nyek.. hehe.. di naman ako mauubusan ng poems eh.. basta nanjan kayo.. hehe.. :salute: kahit di ko passion ang pagwra-write.. :thumbsup: i know i could still make one.. kahit minsan medyo nonesense na.. or corny.. haha.. :lol:

br0ken0id
30th Jul '08 Wed, 19:32
nyek.. hehe.. di naman ako mauubusan ng poems eh.. basta nanjan kayo.. hehe.. :salute: kahit di ko passion ang pagwra-write.. :thumbsup: i know i could still make one.. kahit minsan medyo nonesense na.. or corny.. haha.. :lol:

:slap: :giggle:

:alright: kaya yan carl :D

:smack: basta trust y0urself :D

Iyay
30th Jul '08 Wed, 20:03
baka this august matigil na pagpost ko.. i'll be back in manila na eh.. and i'll be busy that time for october board exams kasi doon na ako magrereview.. kaya binigay ko na lahat ng poems ko.. hehe..

i think enough na yang mga poems ko.. :noidea:

God bless po sa board exams, Engr.Gatorade The Poet! Arya! :yipee::clap::excited:

dagupanice
31st Jul '08 Thu, 03:16
:slap: :giggle:

:alright: kaya yan carl :D

:smack: basta trust y0urself :D

oo naman.. hehe,. daming thanks talaga brokie.. :clap:

God bless po sa board exams, Engr.Gatorade The Poet! Arya! :yipee::clap::excited:

oo naman.. God bless us lage.. hehe.. arya? hehe.. saan na new poems mo ms friendship level no. 3 the cocoa? hehe.. we'll be waiting for new ok? excited kami ni brokie.. hehe..

share your talents.. hehe

dagupanice
31st Jul '08 Thu, 17:16
deep thoughts of inspiration


how could i not forget
those times you have inspired me
those deep thoughts of inspiration
that bring colors to my life

when you're gone, i set aside
those pens and papers that you left
everything changes
all are just black and white

and i ask..
would you still forgive me?


:reading:

br0ken0id
31st Jul '08 Thu, 19:01
oo naman.. hehe,. daming thanks talaga brokie.. :clap:

oo naman.. God bless us lage.. hehe.. arya? hehe.. saan na new poems mo ms friendship level no. 3 the cocoa? hehe.. we'll be waiting for new ok? excited kami ni brokie.. hehe..

share your talents.. hehe

:lmao: :welcome: carl :pacute: Iyay the c0c0a [nakikisabay lang :D] p0st ka na ng p0ems :naughty:

:lmao: excited na ak0 :dance:

deep thoughts of inspiration


how could i not forget
those times you have inspired me
those deep thoughts of inspiration
that bring colors to my life

when you're gone, i set aside
those pens and papers that you left
everything changes
all are just black and white

and i ask..
would you still forgive me?


:reading:

:slap: :whistle: sin0 kaya ulit :giggle:

in lababu ata si carl ah :whistle: :lol:

kulit0108
31st Jul '08 Thu, 19:46
ahahha si ate b*0*e*n*i* ba yun? :rofl: :peace: po tayo!

dagupanice
31st Jul '08 Thu, 19:48
:lmao: :welcome: carl :pacute: Iyay the c0c0a [nakikisabay lang :D] p0st ka na ng p0ems :naughty:

:lmao: excited na ak0 :dance:



:slap: :whistle: sin0 kaya ulit :giggle:

in lababu ata si carl ah :whistle: :lol:



hehe.. oo nga.. fave niya cocoa.. gagawa yan ng poem about sa cocoa.. malamang.. hehe


ha?:what:

sinong who? hehe..

anong lababu? hehe..

dagupanice
31st Jul '08 Thu, 19:51
ahahha si ate b*0*e*n*i* ba yun? :rofl: :peace: po tayo!

nyek.. ano na naman yan.. :no:

kaw talaga.. :bawal:

br0ken0id
31st Jul '08 Thu, 20:00
hehe.. oo nga.. fave niya cocoa.. gagawa yan ng poem about sa cocoa.. malamang.. hehe


ha?:what:

sinong who? hehe..

anong lababu? hehe..

:lmao: sige nga IYAY :more:

gumawa ka ng p0em na b0ut c0c0a :naughty: :D

inlababu ~~>> in l0ve :inlove: :lmao:

dagupanice
31st Jul '08 Thu, 20:10
:lmao: sige nga IYAY :more:

gumawa ka ng p0em na b0ut c0c0a :naughty: :D

inlababu ~~>> in l0ve :inlove: :lmao:




hehe.. oo nga.. mas ok yun.. cocoa..

one good day coming up.. hehe..

sana gumawa din si bhlyte.. i think may talent xa.. taga dagupan kaya xa.. praise:

inlababu= in love.. hehe.. hindi kaya..

if you see my latest poem closely, its about letting go.. :noidea:
heart broken.. goodbye.,. :pizza:

Iyay
31st Jul '08 Thu, 20:11
oo naman.. hehe,. daming thanks talaga brokie.. :clap:



oo naman.. God bless us lage.. hehe.. arya? hehe.. saan na new poems mo ms friendship level no. 3 the cocoa? hehe.. we'll be waiting for new ok? excited kami ni brokie.. hehe..

share your talents.. hehe

Haha. The Cocoa pa talaga. haha. Hmm. May new poem na po. Post ko na lang. :yipee:

Iyay
31st Jul '08 Thu, 20:13
:lmao: sige nga IYAY :more:

gumawa ka ng p0em na b0ut c0c0a :naughty: :D

inlababu ~~>> in l0ve :inlove: :lmao:




Ngek. Di ko po alam. Kayo na lang po gumawa. Bagong assignment for you from moi. haha :lol:

br0ken0id
31st Jul '08 Thu, 21:24
:beh: assignment ka dyan :beh:

:chair: its y0urs :belat:

gumawa ka na kasi :guns:

dagupanice
31st Jul '08 Thu, 23:54
:beh: assignment ka dyan :beh:

:chair: its y0urs :belat:

gumawa ka na kasi :guns:

at kailan naman ang deadline niya brokie?

dagupanice
1st Aug '08 Fri, 07:39
undefined


True love cannot be defined
but can be described
but my love for you now is
more than to be described
For all the descriptive words
cannot describe

how much

i
love
you

Iyay
1st Aug '08 Fri, 17:56
oh, wow! Talagang binibigay niyo na po lahat ngayon ha? A poem a day keeps the emo side of you away. haha. Nice, Engr. GTP! :excited:

eloah
1st Aug '08 Fri, 18:49
eow po..........ganda naman ng poem nyo...:clap:

dagupanice
1st Aug '08 Fri, 21:35
oh, wow! Talagang binibigay niyo na po lahat ngayon ha? A poem a day keeps the emo side of you away. haha. Nice, Engr. GTP! :excited:


dami pa nga dito eh.. hehe.. pero i'm reserving them for next week.. basahin mo pa yung iba.. hehe.. :excited::dance::excited:


eow po..........ganda naman ng poem nyo...:clap:

wow.. thanks.. hope nagustuhan mo pa yung iba.. enjoy reading.. :salute:

kulit0108
2nd Aug '08 Sat, 08:14
at kailan naman ang deadline niya brokie?

ahhaha :rofl: uso na ba assignment ngayun?


ahahaha titser brokie ano assignment ni kuya dagupanice nagyun? ahahahah :rofl:

dagupanice
2nd Aug '08 Sat, 08:20
ahhaha :rofl: uso na ba assignment ngayun?


ahahaha titser brokie ano assignment ni kuya dagupanice nagyun? ahahahah :rofl:

yung thesis mo kulit, hindi mo pa ginagawa.. haha.. :rofl:

kulit0108
2nd Aug '08 Sat, 10:33
:what: :rofl: thesis?


katatapos lng ng miracle ko sa religion my thesis pa pla akong gagawin?


:rofl: dapt pare pareho tayo ng aasignment para magkokopyahan n lng tayo^^