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  1. #1

    Default Symbianize LITERATI: Valentine Poem Writing contest 2017 RESULTS!





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    Ang Tunay na Pagibig
    Iniibig kahit ang ugaling Pangit
    Hindi lang ang mukhang nakaka-akit
    Lalong higit ang ugaling sa ulo'y nakakasakit.

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    Ito ay isang poem writing contest kung saan kailngan ninyong gumawa ng isang sweet na tula na naglalaman ng mga nakakairita, nakakainis, hindi maintindihan o negatibong ugali ng taong iyong minahal, minamahal o mamahalin.

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    • Gumawa ng tula, walang restriction sa haba.
    • Filipino, English o Tag-lish lang ang pwede.
    • Dapat ay original at hindi pre-made.
    • Kailngan related sa topic na ipinaliwanag sa taas.
    • Ipasa kay mind^^FREAK sa pamamagitan ng PM sa symbianize.
    • Deadline ng pasahan: February 10, 2017 11:59 pm Philippine Standard Time



    Format of submission:expulsion-onion-head-emoticon.gif
    • Private message through Symbianize.
    • Submitted to mind^^FREAK.
    • Must be sent from the particiapant's own account.
    • Subject line must be " Valentine Poem Writing contest 2017 entry"
    • Entry will only be considered as qualified upon receipt of a "entry qualified" reply from mind^^FREAK
    • We may return entries for a one time chance of editing, but participants are not allowed to make such request.
    • Entry format should be:


    Title
    Author

    (Content)


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    Anyone can join provided they meet the following criteria:
    • Must have 50 or more post.
    • Must have a joint Symbianize on or before September 30,2016.
    • No existing infraction.



    Criteria for Judging:

    originality and style 20%
    the style of writing and interpretation of the theme and the uniqueness of the poem.

    Relevance to the theme 20%
    How the theme was interpreted by the poet.

    Form and Quality 30%
    includes literariness of the poem, literary device, rhyme, and coherence to the form if the poetry is with form.

    Content 10%
    the ideas, philosophy and ideology the author relays through his poem.

    Organization and unity 10%
    how the author built up his poem and how he was able to present his ideas that makes the poem whole.

    Votes 10%

    These amazing prices await the winners:





    (for First Place Only.)



    • 1st place: 300 load to any network +100 reputation points
    • 2nd place: 150 load to any network + 50 reputation points
    • 3rd place: 50 load to any network + 25 reputation points







    Here is a sample:



    Not A Love Poem
    by mind^^FREAK




    I love you so dearly hindi dahil sa iyong beauty.
    My heart skips a beat hindi dahil sa iyong ngiting mapang-akit.
    I'm head over heels hindi dahil sayo'ng curves na nakakagigil.
    And i don't fall over and over again dahil sa iyong paglalambing.





    You are so special parang halo-halong may ice cream sa ibabaw,
    Parang turon na may langka,
    Parang lugaw na hinaluan ng itlog na nilaga.
    Pero hindi yan ang dahilan for you to own this man.





    I love you dearly dahil sa iyong pagsimangot,
    Every time I'm late sa ating date na minsan ko lang iinitiate.
    My heart skips a beat pag kinukurot mo ako sa gilid tuwing mangungulangot ako at pabirong sayo'y ipapahid.
    I'm head over heels pag ika'y nag tatampo,
    Every time na nagmimiryenda ako ng solo.
    And I fall over and over again hindi dahil mahal mo ako kundi dahil mahal kita at ang pagtatantrums mo.



    Ano pa ang inaantay mo? Sulat na!

    Kung may katanungan or reaction, post it here: Discussion Thread
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    Symbianize Literati reserves the right to deem an entry qualified or disqualified depending on the consensus of the usergroup.
    Last edited by mind^^FREAK; 26th Jan 2017 at 01:17.

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    Default Re: Symbianize LITERATI: Valentine Poem Writing contest 2017

    Contest Results

    Congratulations to all the participants. You all did a wonderful job in the contest and you made it a success!
    and we look forward to your participation in the future contest.


















    Some commentaries:


    Entry Comment
    1 maganda ang pagkakagawa. sweet at may humor.

    2 unique. maganda ang narration kaso may humihiwalay na lines. nawawala ang unity tapos babalik. maganda sana kung narearrange ang lines.

    3 madaming emosyon maganda para sa isang tula pero nakalimutan ng bahagya ang theme na dapat maging sweet.

    4 bitin. sayang ang ibinigay na kwento. tinapos agad wala pang climax

    5 medyo tumaliwas sa theme. ito kasi dapat ay magpakita ng sweetness sa isang minamahal, mamahalin o mamahalin.

    6 siguro base ito sa totoong buhay.maganda kulang lang sa pagkasweet

    7 okay ang isang to. hindi mapalabok. buo at tuloy tuloy.

    8 malamang suki ito sa orig lit. maganda ang flow ng tula. sarap basahin ng tuloy tuloy.

    9 maganda ang banggaan ng mga linya. patok sa akin ang irony at sarcasm.

    10 parang minadali. may mga pilit na salita na pwede sanang hinanapan ng mas okay na word para maging matibay ang kwento ng tula



    1 PAK NI WAN - It was a good read. Personal ang atake at alam mong may specific person syang tinutukoy (hindi sya general poem). Hindi din pilit yun humor at may sweetness na sakto sa poem. Kudos!

    2 A Letter Poem for the no time for love Police Woman - Good choice sa napiling character ng tula. I'm not just sure kung based on true to life story ba ito or hindi. Nabigyan naman ng hustisya si Police Woman, kaya lang medyo magulo yun hulma ng story sa tula. Medyo hindi nagtugma-tugma yun mga linya eh. Meron din lines na kahit hindi isinama, tatakbo naman yun tula or kung nanghihinayang sa mga lines, it could be re-arranged para mas swak sa poem. Saka bakit ang haba ng title ng tula mo? Baket?

    3 My love at First Sight - It was good. Ginalingan lang sa tema ng contest na "nakakairita, nakakainis, hindi maintindihan o negatibong ugali ng taong iyong minahal, minamahal o mamahalin." at nakalimutan na yun unang "gumawa ng isang sweet na tula". Ramdam at appreciated ko yung gustong gawing humorous nun writer yun tula nya, however, nasobrahan ata at mas naemphasize si negative. Bilang nagsusulat din ako ng tula, ok naman yun tula pero kung ako jowa ng gumawa nito, mas miirita ako kesa sa matutuwa.

    4 Ala-Ala - Medyo sad naman yung tulang to. Naramdaman ko yun lungkot sa tula. Hindi man masyadong najustify yun kwento sa tula at yun mga negative na bagay na minahal ng writer dun sa tao, maayos naman yun takbo at wala ng paligoy-ligoy at gets agad na "ex" na yun tinutukoy. Good job for putting your emtions sa tula.

    5 Piling Pag-ibig - Medyo may POGI problems ata yun writer nito at may multiple choices. Hindi ko rin mafigure kung sino sa tatlo ang tinutukoy nya sa tula. Isa lang bang tao tinutukoy ng tula o silang tatlo na may pare-pareho ng katangian? Medyo magulo? Kung iisang tao lang naman yun dinidescribe ng writer sana, iniba ang beginning at ending ng tula. Kung ganun, sana najustify yun tula at yun tema.

    6 Simple lang, direct to the point sa pagiging seloso ng jowa. Naramdaman ko ang acceptance ng situation ng writer pero hindi ang kasweetan na isa sa tema ng contest.

    7 Sorry medyo nalito ako sa line na to, "Ikaw ang babaeng beast at ako ang babaeng beauty." No offense meant, pero medyo nalito ako kung parehong babae ang mga characters. Kung pareho ngang babae ang characters, maayos yung flow ng tula pero kung may error sa genders ng characters, make sure lang na maitama para mas swak!

    8 "No Reason - Wow english! Very good in the form and unity of the Poem. Hindi ako nahirapang maintindihan yung tula at kung anong gustong sabihin ng write, nakasulat na lahat, wala ng pahirapan. Saka I personally like the last part "" Why should I ask too much questions?
    Loving you requires no reason."" Good Job!
    "
    9 "No question with how the poem was written, may gustong patunguhan yun writer pero may ilan lang hindi naayos sa mga linya ""You always took me for granted, ngunit sa’yo pari ay naakit."" Medyo OC lang ba ako, or importante kasing tama yun words sa poem to lessen confusions. ""Ngunit sa'yo pari ay naakit or Ngunit sa'yo parin ay naakit?"" I'm not sure kung kasalanan ba ng pag-copy paste ni TS MF or yun talaga yun pagkakasulat ni writer. Also sa last part ""But then I realize ugali natin ay iisa.
    Nagsimula ng mag-iba,
    ikot ng mundo para sating dalawa.
    Noon din ay napaisip,
    Subalit pinigilan masambit ng bibig.
    I hate you, pero mahal kita!"" We have to make sure sa mga punctuation marks natin. Kapag gumamit kasi tayo ng maling panctuation or nailagay sa maling pwesto, nagiiba ibig sabihin or nagugulo yun meaning. Why not try ""But then I realized, ugali nating iisa,
    Nagsimula ng mag-iba, Pati ang ikot ng mundo para sating dalawa.
    Noon din ay napaisip,
    Subalit pinigilan masambit ng bibig,
    I hate you, pero mahal kita!"""







    Participants:

    Entry no.1
    PAK NI WAN
    Kaytotielang

    Enrty no.2
    A Letter Poem for the no time for love Police Woman
    Blindpen

    Entry no.3
    My love at First Sight
    Johnslike

    Entry no.4
    ALA-ALA
    By: Wakokohekhek

    Entry no. 5
    Piling Pag-ibig
    by LeViNcE

    Entry no.6
    SELOSO
    Januaryanne

    Entryno.7
    Hindi Karapat Dapat
    Demon Spade

    Entry no.8
    No reason
    nasabayabasan07

    Entry no.9
    I hate you, Mahal kita!
    ~Yokiro~

    Entry no.10
    Sabihin man nila
    vhin5

    Congrats to:

    nasabayabasan07 - 1st Place

    ~Yokiro~ - 2nd Place

    Kaytotielang - 3rd Place



    Please PM me your numbers

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