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Default Tricycle: Revenge, Lies and Love (Chapter 1-end)updated 03-07-10

I. the tricycle driver and the teacher



Gising na ang mga tambay, nakapwesto na agad sa may tindahan habang sinusundan ng tingin ang mga nagdaraan. Gising na ang mga bata, ang ilang ay naghahanda na para sa eskwela, ang iba naman ay naglalaro na sa kalye. Gising na din ang mga matatanda, nagwawalis ng ikinalat ng mga tambay at mga bata.

Tirik na ang araw ngunit nakahiga pa din si Luis. Matindi ang sakit ng kanyang ulo kaya tinatamad bumangon. Palibhasa ay lasing na naman kagabi tila naging parte na ng kanyang dugo ang alkohol.

Matalim ang sikat ng araw na pilit pumasok sa maliit na bintana ng kwarto ni Luis. Mahapdi na sa balat kaya napilitan na siyang umalis sa kama. Tinungo ang ref para kumuha ng yelo, binalot ng tuwalya saka idinikit sa masakit na bahagi ng ulo. Muling bumalik si Luis sa magulong kama na puno ng maduming damit, magazine, sapatos, gusot na dyaryo,ilang piraso ng baraha at larawan ng isang babae.

Pagkalipas ng ilang sandali ng pagkawala sa sarili ay bumangon siya para maligo. Nagsipilyo habang nakapikit pa rin ang mga mata saka nagbihis ng luma at punit na damit. Lumabas siya ng bahay para bumili ng gamot.

'Ha!ha! Tangna pare! Tanga noong crew kahapon hindi niya nahalatang ipinuslit ko yung pending number!' pagyayabang ni Jose sa harap ng tindahan ni Aling Remy.


'Oo nga! Noong isang araw nga platers naman nila ang kinuha ko! Magandang gawing photoframe 'yon!' dagdag pa ng ayaw magpatalong si Ariel.

'Masaya naman kayo sa ginawa n'yo? Eh kung nahuli kayo makatawa pa kaya kayo sa loob ng selda?'sabat ni Luis. 'Isang paracetamol nga Aling Remy.'

'Trip trip lang naman 'yun Luis.' Sobrang sineryoso mo naman.' si Jose.

'Kahit pa, magnanakaw pa ang turing sa inyo kung nahuli kayo. Kung nagkataon may picture pa kayo dun,' pangaral pa ni Luis na parang nakatatandang kapatid ng mga tambay.

'Eh ikaw naman Luisito kelan mo balak itigil ang paglalasing?' pag-alaala ni Aling Remy na nagsisilbing pangalang ina na rin kay Luis. 'Aba lagi ka na lang ganyan hijo.'

'Sigurado si Cielo pa rin ang dahilan. Madami naman babaeng nagkandarapa na pwede pag-ukulan ng bagong pagmamahal,' nakangiting kantiyaw ni Ariel.

'Luis, parang anak na din ang turing ko sa'yo kaya huwag mo sana mamasamain ang mga sinasabi ko pero pandalian lang ang maitutulong ng alak para makalimot.'

'Kaya nga po dinadalasan ko ang pag-iinom Aling Remy,' pilosopong sagot niya. Tumalikod si Luis sa matanda matapos isubo na parang kendi ang paracetamol.

Tinungo niya ang kinaroroonan ng kanyang tricyle. Simulang linisin, inalis ang bote ng alak at itaboy ang pagpipyestang mga langaw sa tira- tirang kornik sa sahig ng tricycle. Kinausap niya ang tricycle na parang nakababatang kapatid.

'Poy, pasensiya na kung napapabayaan na kita. Hayaan mo paliliguan kita mamaya kung gusto mo sabay pa tayo Poy,' nangiting wika niya sa tricycle na tinatawag niyang Poy. 'Ibinili nga pala kita ng bagong salamin. Sorpresa ko sa na sa'yo yun kaso sa sobrang kalasingan ko eh nalimutan ko nang ikabit.'

'Kuya, Divine Academy po.' putol ni Jo-Anne sa pagsisintemyento ni Luis. Bagong lipat lang si Jo-Anne matapos matanggap bilang isang teacher sa Divine Academy. Nakikituloy siya sa bahay paupahan ni Aling Remy.

'Miss nililinis pa. Hindi pa ako papasada.'

'Sige na kuya malelate na ako. Kanina pa ako naghihintay dito e.' mangiyak-ngiyak na pagmamakaawa ni Jo-Anne.

'Madaming tricycle sa kalsada. May masasakyan ka pa.'

'Suplado naman.' padabog na umalis si Jo-Anne.

'Oh Jo-Anne bakit sambakol ang mukha mo eh kaaga-aga?' tanong ni Aling Remy.

'Hirap po kasing sumakay kanina pa akong naghihintay.'

'Naku hija, doon pa sa ikalawang kanto ang sakayan.' Teka nandyan pala si Luis ipapahatid kita.' ani ni Aling Remy ng makita ang tricycle ni Luis.

'Nakausap ko na siya Aling Remy, nililinis pa daw. Suplado pa.'

Lumabas si Aling Remy bitbit ang isang walis tambo saka sinugod si Luis dahil sa pagtanggi nitong isakay ang bago niyang boarder.

'Lintik na bata ka!' sigaw ng matanda habang iwinawasiwas ang hawak na walis. 'Ihatid mo nga si Mam, Keganda gandang bata eh nakasimangot agad dahil sa ugali mo. Hala kilos!'

Napakamot si Luis na parang naubsan ng salitang pwedeng katwiran.'Nililinis pa kasi Aling Remy. Madumi ang sidecar.'

'Pwede akong backride. Makapasok lang ng maaga.' mapang-asar na ngiti ni Jo-Anne matapos makuha ng kakampi.

'Yun naman pala eh. Pagpasensiyahan mo na hija. Mabait naman ang batang yan, may sumpong lang dahil bagong gising. Luis ingat sa pagmamaneho.'

Parang batang sumunod si Luis sa kagustuhan ng matanda. Pinaandar ni Luis ang tricycle na parang nang-aasar sa sobrang bagal ng kanyang pagpapatakbo. Ilang batang nagbibisekleta ang lumampas na sa kanila. Lumampas na rin ang isang nagjojogging na retired army. Natatawa lang siya sa ginagawa niyang trip sa dalaga.

'Kuya baka pwede bilisan ng konte.'

'Wala akong insurance mas maganda na ang mabagal para safe.' pasusot si Luis. 'Tsaka hindi tayo close kaya huwag mo akong tawagin kuya.'

'Suplado mo naman. Nakikiusap na nga e. Late na kasi ako.' nakasimangot na sagot nito. 'Hindi naman kagwapuhan sobrang suplado,' ngulngol pa.

'Gwapo lang ba ang may karapatang maging suplado?' sa sandaling yon ay nakangiti na si Luis. Nawala na siguro ang sakit ng ulo kaya nabago ang mood. 'Ngayon lang kita napansin dito bago ka lang ba?'

'Kahapon lang.' si Jo-Anne.

'Komportable ka lang ba diyan? Ililipat na lang kita ng ibang tricycle para hindi ka mahirapan.'

'Ok na ako dito, pakibilisan na lang.'

'Hindi ko pa kasi naayos to kaya mabagal lang ang takbo. Sabi ko naman sayo na hindi pa ako papasada e kasi marami pa sana akong aayusin. Pinagbigyan ko lang si Aling Remy.'

'Ah ganun ba, pasensiya na. Kung alam ko lang na wala palang dumadaan dun naglakad na agad sa may kanto.' Huminga ng malalim si Jo-Anne saka muling nagsalita. ' Luis ba o Luisito ang pangalan mo?'

'Luis lang, Luisito lang kapag galit si Aling Remy. Ikaw may pangalan ka ba?'

'Meron din naman. Kaso isinisekreto lang.' bawi ni Jo-Anne.

'Siguro mabaho ang pangalan mo kaya hindi pwedeng ipagkalat.'

'Yabang mo! Dito na lang ako.' wika ni Jo-Anne.

'Natural. Divine na to e.' Dudukot pa lang si Jo-Anne ng bayad ngunit bigla humarurot na agad palayo si Luis.

'Gago talaga yon. Napaniwala ako na hindi pwedeng bilisan.' bulong ni Jo-Anne sa sarili halip na magalit ay nakangiting pumasok ng school gate si Jo-Anne. Namangha siya tahimik ngunit malalim na katauhan ni Luis.


itutuloy...


chapter 2
chapter 3
chapter 4
chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
chapter 11

end





i love comments.. medyo dragging e..
sana maging ok ang takbo ng tricycle na to.. adventure, suspense at love story to e...



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Sabi na nga ba isa na naman itong obra ni panjo, tinitignan ko pa lang sa feeds nahulaan ko na.

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Good job!
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Panjo pakibilisan mu naman ang trayk. Bitin kasi eh. Naiinip na ako. ganda kasi ng storya eh.



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Panjo pakibilisan mu naman ang trayk. Bitin kasi eh. Naiinip na ako. ganda kasi ng storya eh.

mabagal talaga ang trayk na yan.. luma na e
clue.. malayo ang simula sa totoong kwento

wala lang akong maisip na title..



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hehehe,, kakatuwa ang story.
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feed://view:25//http://www.symbianiz....php?type=RSS2

Eto po yung feeds

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