[djvince301]

THESE WRITTEN VAPID LINES

I thee say this to you, a sign of gratitude,
Delivered me out from the pit of devil's tar.
With you here by my side, makes me whole.
Yet no dedication, given to you thus far,
I struggle to the top, in every step I crawl.
Got lost in dark alleys; achievement was unknown.
But you give me a token, and I had been known.
These written vapid lines, lest, may not be enough.
To thy purest virtue, God to you have bestowed.
To the zenith thou name, with bravest heart I’ll roar.

“Thank You and I Love You!” ,for all of earth, my growl.
Deep appreciation, ‘till the end I will treasure.


"Happy Anniversary and Happy Mother's Day Mahal!"

[sam_wel]

nauuso ata talaga ang old english sa mga sonata? hehehe.. ang sweet mo naman tol at meron kang ginawa para sa iyong asawa.

keep sharing tol.

[djvince301]

Isasali ko sana sa Sonnet writting noong april yan eh.. di ko na na-revise mga ibang mali kaya di ko na din tinangkang isali.
brod sa pagbabasa.

[pierrot27]

okay yan! send mu yan sa kanya in personalized way, mas maigi kung handwritten. effective pa din pampakilig ang mga tula. as always, di kumukupas.

[djvince301]

Sige gagawin ko yan ala Fransisco Baltazar style... hehehehehe..

[melala]

Wow! Nice choice of words sarap magbasa ng mga ganito really love the message as well. Keep writing djvince isa ka sa mga inaabangan ko dito sa poem section.

[djvince301]

Ms. Mel...!