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27th Jul 2012 Fri, 19:20
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Yume's Crib (PadrePio's 7-A Challenge)
Yume’s Crib
Towel bathed baby was on her bed,
She wore her favorite hello kitty dress,
Thou tired she still has this little drama,
She said, “I’m not yet sleepy mama.”
Grabbed the iPad she considered her own,
Less than a minute Brainy Baby was on,
I heard she laughed as she saw the clown,
Then later on I noticed her continues yawn.
The door was closed as well as the windows,
Her milk was ready as well as her pillows,
Yet sleepy eyes still wandering around,
Those little eyeballs go round and round.
As she watched the curtains from every wall,
Dancing silently as the wind blow,
Together with the aroma that floral scent brought,
Drowsiness she can never fought.
From the ceiling are stars and moon,
Glowing as soon as the lights are out,
Reminding her that there’s always light,
Even on her darkest night.
A cuddly rabbit was on her side,
Sitting still and watching her sight,
Just in case bad dreams strikes,
Mr. Rabbit can hug her tight.
She finally lied down on her soft wide bed,
And was wrapped by a butterfly blanket,
As she closed her eyes after saying “Goodnight”
I know she’ll be having a sweet dream tonight.
-sssshhhh-
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Go to a room. Or a certain place. It can be outside a building or inside one. Now observe your surroundings. Then tell us what you see: the colors, the smell, the sounds, the emotions. . . Your perceptions of the place. What do you feel about your surroundings? How about the people?
Show us. Tell us. In 200 words or more.
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Last edited by Miss Red; 27th Jul 2012 Fri at 19:21..
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27th Jul 2012 Fri, 19:48
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Re: Yume's Crib (PadrePio's 7-A Challenge)
Ang ganda ng poem! Na-imagine ko yung surroundings.
Maganda ang flow!
Keep it up! 
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27th Jul 2012 Fri, 20:45
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Re: Yume's Crib (PadrePio's 7-A Challenge)
Nice ang danda danda po nito miss red 
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28th Jul 2012 Sat, 00:50
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Re: Yume's Crib (PadrePio's 7-A Challenge)
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Originally Posted by Circuited Soul
Ang ganda ng poem! Na-imagine ko yung surroundings.
Maganda ang flow!
Keep it up!
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Oops15
Nice ang danda danda po nito miss red |
thanks net and kendric
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28th Jul 2012 Sat, 01:40
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The Grand Master
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Re: Yume's Crib (PadrePio's 7-A Challenge)
Nice one sis! Galing galing! 
Naiimagine ko si yume habang binabasa yan.. Inspired kay baby!
DESTINY finds a way to meet your true love. But loving a person is not a destiny...it's a choice and the heart who decides. 
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28th Jul 2012 Sat, 02:37
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Re: Yume's Crib (PadrePio's 7-A Challenge)
this poem was lovely i must say.. it read like a little story yet was still poetic in a sense
i loved how you focused on your baby.. i really felt wrapped up in this moment.. 
well written, miss jean 
I can stare at you and talk to you for the rest of my life..
But i don't think i can live with that.. I'd rather write.
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29th Jul 2012 Sun, 16:43
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Re: Yume's Crib (PadrePio's 7-A Challenge)
Ang cute nito Nay! nai-imagine ko yung pangyayari.
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30th Jul 2012 Mon, 00:44
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Re: Yume's Crib (PadrePio's 7-A Challenge)
Thanks nak sa pagbasa. Ganyan ganyan din tyo nun baby ka pa. Kinakantahan ko ng lullaby.
Hatsing salamat sa pagbasa  hugs
sissy, thanks thanks miss you po.
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30th Jul 2012 Mon, 03:30
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Re: Yume's Crib (PadrePio's 7-A Challenge)
an ganda po ng flow.. feeling ko andun ako mismo sa kwrto ...
"Be wise than other people if you can, but don't tell them so."
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30th Jul 2012 Mon, 22:23
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Re: Yume's Crib (PadrePio's 7-A Challenge)
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Originally Posted by juanpablo2
an ganda po ng flow.. feeling ko andun ako mismo sa kwrto ... |
Salamat sa pagbasa.
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