Literati Request a Poem Discussion Thread... POST YOUR REQUESTS HERE

Guys, actually, hindi dapat discussion thread yung request a poem thread natin..hehehhe, pero mukhang hindi maiiwasan kase sa mga follow-folllow up.

Kaya.... trantananan............................

We are presenting a discussion thread for the request a poem thread.

Dito nyo ipost mga request nyo at dito din tayo mag-uusap-usap.

Pag na post nyo ang request nyo dito, ako na ang bahalang maglilipat dun sa kabila. at dun nyo sa kabila makikita ang mga poems na inyong request.

Parang...heheheh, parang exclusive nalang para sakin yung thread na iyon, dahil ako lang ang magpopost duon. Dun ko ipopost ang mga requests at mga poems na sagot sa inyong mga requests.

Isa din sa mga dahilan kung bakit natin igaganito ay para, hindi ako mahihirapan maghanap ng mga pangalan kung magsusubmit ako para sa points ng mga sumagot sa mga requests.

So, eto na....

discuss, discuss and more discussion sa thread na ito.

eto pala ang format ng request:

The FORMAT:


medium: _____________ (eto yung lenguahe)
preferred title: ________________ (may gusto ka bang title na gustong gamitin)
theme/content: _________________ (tungkol ba to sa pag-ibig, galit, nature, salawahan na partner, pag-hihiganti, relihyon, etc)
details: _____________ (ibigay po lahat ng detalye na pwedeng ibigay. explanation kung kinakailangan)




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[dave_shin21]

Re: Literati Presents. . . Request A Poem Thread

yung nirequest ko na pala yung gagawin niyan

salamat sa inyo mga masters

 

[rolthan11]

Re: Literati Presents. . . Request A Poem Thread

A Letter to God

Dear Lord,

My journey had been rough, my life had been like a holocaust.My heart was a halo of thousands of emotions and my hope depleted. I cried a gallon and I died three times.

Yet, when I was about to fall I felt your two hands cuddled me.That's how then i realized, I wasn't crying anymore.I saw people from afar smiling at me and my friends who were near they became closer.

Epiphanies ran through my brains:

You asked me to let go of things I strongly held. I begged you not to pull them out from me. I wanted to prove you that I was right.

I resisted and I ebbed.
I laughed and I agonized.
I sailed and I tripped.
I lingered and I receded.

Through it all, You never gave up on me and the more you stood still before me.
You asked me to trust because You are the way.
You pacified my heart for You are the Peace.
You mended the wounds cause You are a Healer
You refuted me for You are far more Intelligent
You humbled me because You're a lot Kinder
You made me weak cause You're the Strength

You broke me to pieces in order to make me whole
You taught me well to be Wiser..

I want to tell you Lord, i have reached the shore, where the water is calmer and the sand is whiter.
I look back but I don't see you there.I move forward..
and I see you in distance, setting up a new journey
and For sure You're traveling with me..

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can you help me guys
i would love to appreciate to have your comments about this poem? English would be a better words to use TIA

need your comment about this please help!.. anyone??

 

[sam_wel]

Re: Literati Presents. . . Request A Poem Thread

need your comment about this please help!.. anyone??

wrong thread ata... :P

 

[pandasauure]

Re: Literati Presents. . . Request A Poem Thread

wrong thread ata... :P

ok naba yung ginawa kong poem para sa request ni dave?

 

[OneToothFree]

Re: Literati Presents. . . Request A Poem Thread

sir sam. yung akin din ha

 

[PadrePio]

Re: Literati Presents. . . Request A Poem Thread

As promised, we will be giving rep points to those who contributed poems on these thread.

@Sam, kindly send me the list of those who submitted poems on these thread.

 

[pandasauure]

Re: Literati Presents. . . Request A Poem Thread

sir sam. yung akin din ha

kindly wait for your turn sir meron pa po kasi request na hindi pa po tapos pero ano po ba yung request nyu para po makagawa na ko?

 

[dave_shin21]

Re: Literati Presents. . . Request A Poem Thread

ask ko lang po mga masters kung pwede ko po bang makuha lahat ng poem na magsusubmit sa inyo ukol po sa request ko?

or yung mapipili niyo lang po ang pwede kong makuha?

 

[jinny]

Re: Literati Presents. . . Request A Poem Thread

ask ko lang po mga masters kung pwede ko po bang makuha lahat ng poem na magsusubmit sa inyo ukol po sa request ko?

or yung mapipili niyo lang po ang pwede kong makuha?

ipopost po dito once na ma compile na lahat ng pinasang poems

 

[OneToothFree]

Re: Literati Presents. . . Request A Poem Thread

kindly wait for your turn sir meron pa po kasi request na hindi pa po tapos pero ano po ba yung request nyu para po makagawa na ko?

nasa page 9 po yung akin .

 

[ExcL]

Re: Literati Presents. . . Request A Poem Thread

Good day po.

I would like to request a poem din sana.

Well here's the background story:

Anniversary ng panliligaw ko sa kanya this coming February 11. Ang problem lang is biglang kinailangan akong sumama sa probinsya this coming Feb. 10.
Mandatory, I have no choice.
So basically, sa unang anniversary namin na pareho naming pinakaaabangan, dun pa kami sa mismong araw na yun hindi magiging magkasama. (and that I will be missing her badly)

Gusto ko lang magdedicate na poem sa kanya. In which case I could use your help. It would be highly appreciated.

Additional info: manliligaw palang ako pero parang kami na. Pero hindi pa kami. Parang lang. Labo, no.
ANd yes, mag-iisang taon na akong nanliligaw.. Tatag eh, no?
Wala lang. Baka makatulong rin yan sa pagpili ng tamang wordings na ilalagay sa poem.

Maraming salamat po in advance mga idol.


EDIT: dagdag ko lang po na sana may pagka-"Happy first anniversary" yung dating.

English or Tagalog? Umm.. Kayo na pong bahala.

 

[pandasauure]

Re: Literati Presents. . . Request A Poem Thread

nasa page 9 po yung akin .

OK SIR wait na lang natin matapos yung kay sir dave

Good day po.

I would like to request a poem din sana.

Well here's the background story:

Anniversary ng panliligaw ko sa kanya this coming February 11. Ang problem lang is biglang kinailangan akong sumama sa probinsya this coming Feb. 10.
Mandatory, I have no choice.
So basically, sa unang anniversary namin na pareho naming pinakaaabangan, dun pa kami sa mismong araw na yun hindi magiging magkasama. (and that I will be missing her badly)

Gusto ko lang magdedicate na poem sa kanya. In which case I could use your help. It would be highly appreciated.

Additional info: manliligaw palang ako pero parang kami na. Pero hindi pa kami. Parang lang. Labo, no.
ANd yes, mag-iisang taon na akong nanliligaw.. Tatag eh, no?
Wala lang. Baka makatulong rin yan sa pagpili ng tamang wordings na ilalagay sa poem.

Maraming salamat po in advance mga idol.

ok po wait na lang po kayo

 

[ExcL]

Re: Literati Presents. . . Request A Poem Thread

Sure.
I edited my post nga pala. May karagdagang detail lang ako na nilagay.
Thanks ulit.

 

[pandasauure]

Re: Literati Presents. . . Request A Poem Thread

Sure.
I edited my post nga pala. May karagdagang detail lang ako na nilagay.
Thanks ulit.

ok po wait na lang po natin yung signal ni sir sam

 

[jinny]

Re: Literati Presents. . . Request A Poem Thread

parequest po na poem na tungkol sa pagmamahal ng isang lalake s kanyang kasama sa organization at president nila na babae. (hindi po romantic love yung tinutukoy ko. yun pong love as general po. parang friendship poem ganun.)

salamat po in advance. .

pwede bang manghingi ng details ng girl?
like characteristic nya na nagustuhan mo sa kanya

tsaka konting background about your friendship

 

[dave_shin21]

Re: Literati Presents. . . Request A Poem Thread

pwede bang manghingi ng details ng girl?
like characteristic nya na nagustuhan mo sa kanya

tsaka konting background about your friendship

siya po kasi yung president namin ng organization

at ako naman po yung parang vice president niya
(actually hindi talaga ako yung vice president
pero ako po yung inatasan niya para maging vice president)

about sa characteristics naman po niya:

mabait, laging masayahin, she's strong in a sense na kahit marami siyang problema hindi niya pinapakita sa akin at sa iba, pasensyosa, pinakanagustuhan ko sa kanya eh she loves GOD very much

about sa friendship naman po namin:

well almost 1 year ko na siyang kaibigan.

dati mejo close naman kami, lumalabas para mag usap, pero ngayon hindi na pero I understand naman busy na rin kasi siya eh.

ang gusto ko po sana eh yung poem na gagawin niyo po eh tungkol sa pasasalamat sa president namin, sa lahat ng pangunguna niya, tsaka paghingi na rin ng sorry kasi as vice president niya eh nagkukulang ako o hindi ko masyadong nagagawa ng maayos mga trabaho o pinapagawa sa akin.

hope yung mga info ko po na binigay eh sapat na para makagawa po kayo.

salamat po ng marami sa inyo mga masters and more power

 

[breaker004]

Re: Literati Presents. . . Request A Poem Thread

Good day po.

I would like to request a poem din sana.

Well here's the background story:

Anniversary ng panliligaw ko sa kanya this coming February 11. Ang problem lang is biglang kinailangan akong sumama sa probinsya this coming Feb. 10.
Mandatory, I have no choice.
So basically, sa unang anniversary namin na pareho naming pinakaaabangan, dun pa kami sa mismong araw na yun hindi magiging magkasama. (and that I will be missing her badly)

Gusto ko lang magdedicate na poem sa kanya. In which case I could use your help. It would be highly appreciated.

Additional info: manliligaw palang ako pero parang kami na. Pero hindi pa kami. Parang lang. Labo, no.
ANd yes, mag-iisang taon na akong nanliligaw.. Tatag eh, no?
Wala lang. Baka makatulong rin yan sa pagpili ng tamang wordings na ilalagay sa poem.

Maraming salamat po in advance mga idol.


EDIT: dagdag ko lang po na sana may pagka-"Happy first anniversary" yung dating.

English or Tagalog? Umm.. Kayo na pong bahala.

sir, what if hindi umabot ang pagkagawa sa date na Feb10 or Feb11? kasi sir, first come first serve at dahil in demand ngayon baka hindi umabot sa date ng 'aniversary' nyo..
approximately, mapopost ang isang request after a week pagkatapos ivalidate ang request or depende sa pagsusuring gagawin..
ok lang ba sa yo yun?

 

[arv_in618]

Re: Literati Presents. . . Request A Poem Thread

pa request po ng poem tungkol sa magbest friend na lalaki at babae
tapos yung lalaki umamin sya na may gusto sa best friend nya pero yung girl di pa maka move on sa past lovelife nya in english po salamat

up ko lang po request ko baka matabunan

 

[pandasauure]

Re: Literati Presents. . . Request A Poem Thread

up ko lang po request ko baka matabunan

wait for your turn sir hahah magagwa po namin yan inuuna lang po yung mas nauna po sayu wait lang po tayo salamat po

 

[ExcL]

Re: Literati Presents. . . Request A Poem Thread

@breaker004: oo nga eh. Di ko napansin agad na marami pa palang nakapila.
Pero sige. Better late than nothing.
If hindi aabot ng pang-Feb 11, strip down nalang nung ibang details like iba na yung scenario, pang anniversary nalang yung theme ng poem. Ibahin ko nalang yung details. Pero bigay ko nalang yung pamalit na details pag turn ko na.