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To all nursing students "must read" - My Anatomy and Physiology of Love `nice poem`

To all nursing students "must read" - My Anatomy and Physiology of Love `nice poem`

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My Anatomy and Physiology of Love


I am on a deep REM sleep
And I dreamt of you my precious that I keep
I was in the lab and I am dissecting something
What?! Me myself? It’s me I’m killing??!

No, my dear it isn’t I am just diagnosing myself
About my feelings for my conscious health
This heart of mine beating lub dub for you
Hoping you’ll hear it by your auditory nerves too.

When I first saw you my optic nerves were cursed
By your.. orbicularis oculi and oris
With your personality you are superior
With your charms I am inferior.

Your beauty is like an acid that is melting me
And so I’ve decided to neutralize it baby
My charms of basic strong alkalinity
To reach the pH of our compatibility.

My adrenal glands pumps and rushes pushing me through
To say orally my feelings for you
But my thalamus keeps me undecided
Pleasant or unpleasant what this feeling could get.

After memorizing my words to speak
I came to you in integument so neat
My hair strands were polished and my nails were newly cut
Perfume in the air diffusing so fast.

I have three red roses for your olfactory responses
Delicious chocolates for your gustatory buds to taste
I’ve checked my BP and I am not that nervous
Patiently waiting here I am so gentle and courteous.

But then all my plans were messed with atrophy
When you were there standing anterior to me
I want to go back and run away posterior from you
But my patella is shaking and my other skeletons too.

My lungs were busy and my blood circulates rapidly
My muscles didnt move a little and hardens steadily
I want my lacrimal glands to function in my shame for you
But none single tear fell and I felt blue.

You gave me stimuli and I react attentively
My reflexes guided me and helped me
My lymphatic system leads me to immunity
Against my shameful behavior and personality.

Like a DNA of genes, I transcript and translate
Every tissue of epithelia,muscle,nervous and connective
I perspire a lot with my apocrine glands
But I tried my best and held your hands.

“I want to build a happy family with you
with my testes and your ovary, we’re making love through
to bear offspring that is injected with love
that will always be strong and healthy my love”

You’ve said; “ you’re too nice and clever my sweet suitor
But we need to study and be nurses in the future
I promised you then whenever we’re ready
Come and see me and I’ll be happy if you’ll marry me”

Like kidneys and urethra excreting urine
I felt relaxed like an anus after defecating
Those words you’ve told me gave me a new life
So I’ll study hard for you to be my wife.

Then I woke up from my beautiful dream
Holding my book and I am on chapter sixteen
Oohh.. my anatomy and physiology of love
One semester of lectures and experiments in the lab.



Note: I wrote this as a reviewer the night before our final examinations on anatomy and physiology on year 2004, New Era University College of Nursing
my pen name: magnum opus (Latin translation of master piece )

Feedback po kayo ha...
Paki-read na lang po ang mga terminologies na ginamit ko po dito, eto po Definition of Terms
para po sa mga definition nung mga medical terms na ginamit ko.Thanks..

 
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Re: To all nursing students "must read" - My Anatomy and Physiology of Love `nice poe

mahina ako sa ANA AND PHYSIO pero nung nabasa ko to ILOVE ANATOMY na!!!1



talaga?? :clap: nakakatuwa naman :excited: :lol: :thanks: po kung ganun..:yipee: masaya ako at may nagawang mabuti itong poem ko sa yo :salute: kindly read my other poems po :hat:
 
Re: To all nursing students "must read" - My Anatomy and Physiology of Love `nice poe

hahaha nice one tol RN ako kaya appreciate ko talaga haha /no1
 
Re: To all nursing students "must read" - My Anatomy and Physiology of Love `nice poe

hahaha nice one tol RN ako kaya appreciate ko talaga haha /no1


:hi: po.. :thanks: po sa pag appreciate. ok pala at nakarelate po kayo. sana nga po madami pa ang makabasa nito.. :thumbsup:
 
Re: To all nursing students "must read" - My Anatomy and Physiology of Love `nice poe

bro december pako mgttake 1st taker .. pa post sa FB ko hah .. credits to u
 
Re: To all nursing students "must read" - My Anatomy and Physiology of Love `nice poe

bro december pako mgttake 1st taker .. pa post sa FB ko hah .. credits to u

ok sir. you're welcome. best of luck po sa pag take ng board..
:hat:
 
Re: To all nursing students "must read" - My Anatomy and Physiology of Love `nice poe

up ko lng mga sir para mabasa ng iba :superman: :thanks: po
 
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Re: To all nursing students "must read" - My Anatomy and Physiology of Love `nice poe

:rock: :nice: :10: ayos to :rock:
 
Re: To all nursing students "must read" - My Anatomy and Physiology of Love `nice poe

So i guess, talent should need more practice and absorb critism and learn from it.. Anyway that was a good one.. Im not a poem lover but i do appreciate the meaning of it..
 
Re: To all nursing students "must read" - My Anatomy and Physiology of Love `nice poe

So i guess, talent should need more practice and absorb critism and learn from it.. Anyway that was a good one.. Im not a poem lover but i do appreciate the meaning of it..

:wow: :thanks: for the feedback.. talent is a gift that we should always practice.. so i am sharing it to everyone.. :hi:
 
Re: To all nursing students "must read" - My Anatomy and Physiology of Love `nice poe

tol your tha best! Nka relate po tlga ako sa poem mong pang nursing! Hehe! Btw nursing din me 4th yr. Hehe.
 
Re: To all nursing students "must read" - My Anatomy and Physiology of Love `nice poe

tol your tha best! Nka relate po tlga ako sa poem mong pang nursing! Hehe! Btw nursing din me 4th yr. Hehe.

:dance: :thanks: po.. ginawa kong reviewer to nung finals namin sa ana and physio nung first yr pa ako. :rofl: :thumbsup: thanks po sa pag appreciate at pag comment. goodluck sa atin sa board exam..
 
Re: To all nursing students "must read"

That was kind of nice. But not so much. Honestly, this kind of poem will only be appreciated fully by people who understand those alien-like words, like nurses for instance. As for the rest of humanity, I'm quite sure this won't be on their top list of must-read poems. I, for one, almost abandoned reading it after the first line.

Poetry is all about the beauty of the written word. The poet carefully chooses words to evoke a certain mood or emotion in a reader. Having choosen the words, he then starts combining, arranging, rearranging, adding and deducting those words to create a beautiful piece. Something that has a soul.

Oh, and a poem should always possess a certain musicality in it---whether it's a hidden rhythm or a fully revealed beat is of no consequence. The important thing is the musicality.

And they were all lacking in the poem above.

I find it bland and dry. You have built its structure around those alien-like words instead of the other way around. And the consequence was that, the metering, the natural rhythm, the rhyming ends and the overall harmony of the structure felt inexact, jagged, and warped out. After reading it, no strong emotion was evoked in me other than indifference. Most importantly, no soul was found after opening it's shell.

If you want to share your thoughts to the world, try to think outside the box, do not wallow in your own world too much and write something that is universally understood, accepted and enjoyed by all. :hat:

Keep Writing!



:thanks: po sa pagcomment master.. nabasa ko po yung poem mo na lorena bobiit.. :lol: grabe,, kakatawa po talaga :rofl:
 
Re: To all nursing students "must read" - My Anatomy and Physiology of Love `nice poe

hayyyy namiss ko anatomy and physiology subject ko.. :lmao: i up ko lang po.. :superman:
 
Re: To all nursing students "must read" - My Anatomy and Physiology of Love `nice poe

like! like! like! much much much tlga!! ang gAling u aman po!!!! sooo talented!!1 sna ganyan din me!!! hehehe
 
Re: To all nursing students "must read" - My Anatomy and Physiology of Love `nice poe

haha.okay yan medical terms na talaga ginamit.epistaxis pag di mo alam haha!Better download medical dictionary.
 
Re: To all nursing students "must read" - My Anatomy and Physiology of Love `nice poe

GALING MO tol!
gawa ka pa, case presentation nman ! hHhHhA
:clap::clap::clap:
 
Re: To all nursing students "must read" - My Anatomy and Physiology of Love `nice poe

like! like! like! much much much tlga!! ang gAling u aman po!!!! sooo talented!!1 sna ganyan din me!!! hehehe

:thanks: po sa pag appreciate.. hobby ko po kasi ito esp pag toxic na sa hospital.. :lmao: kaya mo din gumawa ng ganito :thumbsup:
 
Re: To all nursing students "must read" - My Anatomy and Physiology of Love `nice poe

haha.okay yan medical terms na talaga ginamit.epistaxis pag di mo alam haha!Better download medical dictionary.

medical dictionary po talaga ah :rofl: nagprovide naman po ako ng simple definition of terms sa 1st page para di ma nosebleed (epistaxis) yung iba at makarelate po sila.. :thanks: po sa pagcomment :hat:
 
Re: To all nursing students "must read" - My Anatomy and Physiology of Love `nice poe

GALING MO tol!
gawa ka pa, case presentation nman ! hHhHhA
:clap::clap::clap:

:thanks: po sa pagcomment... :yipee: case presentation?! cge po pag may time.. medyo busy po kasi sa mga duty.. :hat:
 
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