Poem Long Distance

Long Distance

The fire of our love and trust propel a sinking ship
Falling to the depths will be freeze by this undying grip
Though you are not here in our mystic place,
Beautiful symphony caresses your trace.

When others are gloom by a love from afar,
Ours shine because you are a distant star
When others are tempted by a lovely sin,
I am seduced to long for your lovely skin.

In an ocean of strangers that tries to drown,
This undying grip will not leave you down
In a day where a storm of mess try to trip your will,
The promise of forever will leave you standing still.

 

[eyerah]

ang galing naman..nakakarelate ako ditey..nice nice..
more please
ang lalim nung content...this kind of writing ang gusto ko matutunan..
keep it up boss ^_^

 

[anishgiri]

ang galing naman..nakakarelate ako ditey..nice nice..
more please
ang lalim nung content...this kind of writing ang gusto ko matutunan..
keep it up boss ^_^

Salamat at nagustuhan ng isang makata na tulad mo ang gawa ko. Kaya mo din po iyan, basta pag may naramdaman at naisip, sulat lang ng sulat.

 

[soundtest]

gusto ko rin matotong mag sulat ng ganyan ka lalim. astig gandang basahin eh

 

[electric leroux]

nainlab na din ako sa malayong tala,

hahaha. astig sir ,

more pa.

 

[anishgiri]

gusto ko rin matotong mag sulat ng ganyan ka lalim. astig gandang basahin eh

Kaya mo din iyan bossing.

nainlab na din ako sa malayong tala,

hahaha. astig sir ,

more pa.

Bossing, I think most of us at one point ay naranasan na mapalayo sa ating minamahal,hehe.

 

[eugemiras]

Galing

 

[5nowflak3]

sir pahiram naman, post ko lang sa fb ko para sa aking girlfriend, seaman kasi ako,

 

[wasaps00]

Ganda dami talagang magagaling magsulat dito.

 

[anishgiri]

sir pahiram naman, post ko lang sa fb ko para sa aking girlfriend, seaman kasi ako,

Okay sige.

 

[rizamaepeko]

nice one po kuya naka relate ako dito
napaka lalalim to the maximum level