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Poem Rachiersh's Poems

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:D Rachiersh aka br0ken0id :D​


My List of Poems and Its Links :naughty:
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[2007]​

[2008]​

A Place in Me | Setting My Heart Free | As You Say Goodbye| I'm in Love with YOU | It's YOU
I did it All for YOU (Part 1) | I did it All for YOU (Part 2) | Sleepy | Forgive Me | Glad to have You
Finally | Secret Crush | Gift | Unexpectedly | Hidden Feeling | Unknown Feeling | Disappointed
Celebration | We Can Dominate | Extraordinary | Cococrunch | Bleeding Through | Let's Not say Goodbye
Sacrifice | Hard | Not a Happy Ending | Left Alone | Prisoner | Waiting | Why | Demerge
Brokenoid by Dagupanice | Malas | Beside You | Jealous cow by Jhetcola | Life | Lie | Regrets
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[2009 - 2010]​

You Don't Know | Out of the Blue | Alive (A Response) by Ryuk08
Graduation | Confused | Blind | The Way Around | New Phase | Farewell
No Reason | The Gift | Poet's Joy | Dear You | Prisoner in Me | Lies
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[2011 - 2018]​

Creations by HIM | Memory | Abrupt | Inception | I Don't Remember
Losing Myself | Green | Sad | Red | Fading Away | Think | Deficient
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[2022]​

 
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:wow:

Ang ganda!!!

Ang kyut!!!

:clap: :clap: :clap:






































ng mga smileys! :rofl:









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yung #9 binasa ko.. gaya nga ng sabi dun..
thank you:approve:
 
Re: +|br0ken0id's p0ems|+

tito naman :slap:

:lmao:

kekok :smack: keep it up :approve:

:naughty:

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natatabunan na pala ako ng mga bago :lol:

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:think:

sana maging inspired na ulit ako :sigh:

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br0ken0id said:
Confused

I am starting to shiver, :cold:
Once you’re in sight. :eek:
My mind is crammed with conjecture,
Or my heart is only with fright. :tense:

Will this emotion stop?
When did it start?
How can I listen to my mind,
Without flouting my heart? :sigh: :(

I’m really confused. :ohno:
And nothing is induced,
What should I do?
I can’t think of anything except you. :cloud9:

Should I disregard you,
Or just give it time?
I can’t think straight,
My heart reins my mind. :wub: :upset:


P.S.

this poem is for you :( :sigh:​
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I love this one
thanks!
 
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gawa ka para sa kamatayan ko
hinihiling ko na nga ang kamatayan!
:thanks:
sawa na ako sa buhay
 
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very nice poems... tnx 4 sharing...
 
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New Phase

The door you go through,
Close to depart soaring,
To go find something new,
Even if it is leave-taking.

High school has now faded,
No more waking up dreaded.
Everything is now reminiscences,
A new life on your possess.

Walking through this door,
Makes your tears pour.
Now the day is near,
Missing them is what you may fear.

Once you go through the entry,
Choices may look like a bouquet,
By fusing into the hall of many,
Where you can opt what you like or any.
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wow. okay, that index in itself is quite intimidating, lol. awesome collections though. :) i'd say keep it up, but it seems that's unnecessary, hehe.
 
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br0ken0id said:
New Phase

The door you go through,
Close to depart soaring,
To go find something new,
Even if it is leave-taking.

High school has now faded,
No more waking up dreaded.
Everything is now reminiscences,
A new life on your possess.

Walking through this door,
Makes your tears pour.
Now the day is near,
Missing them is what you may fear.

Once you go through the entry,
Choices may look like a bouquet,
By fusing into the hall of many,
Where you can opt what you like or any.

requested by tobi :D


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Thanks thanks thanks
thanks talaga Brokie! :clap: :salute:
 
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ferofax said:
wow. okay, that index in itself is quite intimidating, lol. awesome collections though. :) i'd say keep it up, but it seems that's unnecessary, hehe.
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intimidating? :o in what sense sir fero? :think:

Tobi said:
Thanks thanks thanks
thanks talaga Brokie! :clap: :salute:
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cnxa kung simple lang tobi :D

:giggle:


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@brokenoid: well, it's quite a lot, haha. 80+ poems takes some time to process, hehe. :)
 
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Hi brokenoid


Nice work


I think you have to be more detailed with your images, Try to focus on images and use them in the metaphorical sense..:thumbsup:


And also remember that good poems don't need to be in rhythm. the best way to touch your reader's emotions (especially bitter ones) is to play with the images and let them speak for your poems.
:thumbsup:
 
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AkosiTeya said:
Hi brokenoid


Nice work


I think you have to be more detailed with your images, Try to focus on images and use them in the metaphorical sense..:thumbsup:


And also remember that good poems don't need to be in rhythm. the best way to touch your reader's emotions (especially bitter ones) is to play with the images and let them speak for your poems.
:thumbsup:
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hey, don't set the bar too high though, haha. they don't have to be as ridiculously vivid as your works, but they are excellent examples to effective play of words.:lol:
 
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Personally, I like poems that show strong, crisp and vivid mental images. But I will have to agree with ferofax though. It (poem) doesn't always have to be crammed with bursting colors and vivid imagery. Much like writing prose, a poet also has to have that keen sense of knowing when to tell and when to show to create a more powerful piece.

Simple, ordinary words arranged in an extraordinary manner to achieve a deeper connotation and shade of meaning can---and will---also offer a profound and memorable reading experience. :hat:
 
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Yup. i do appreciate her work. It's not normal to write many poems and still maintain the creative process..:thumbsup:


i think that the best way to improve as a writer is to accept suggestions and engage more in creative activities..which is basically the reason why i give suggestions to help you in my own little way..

the more you write harder, the more creative you become..please write more..and don't lose that creative enthusiasm:salute:
 
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ferofax said:
@brokenoid: well, it's quite a lot, haha. 80+ poems takes some time to process, hehe. :)
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i know sir ferofax..ang nakakasama..piga na emotion ko..di na ako nakakapagsulat masyado :lmao:

AkosiTeya said:
I think you have to be more detailed with your images, Try to focus on images and use them in the metaphorical sense..:thumbsup:


And also remember that good poems don't need to be in rhythm. the best way to touch your reader's emotions (especially bitter ones) is to play with the images and let them speak for your poems.
:thumbsup:
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i appreciate you suggestions ms Teya :hat:
some of my friend poets are encouraging me the same way you told me..
but the thing is..i choose to stay with the style that i use to do..
and that is rhyming..

AkosiTeya said:
the more you write harder, the more creative you become..please write more..and don't lose that creative enthusiasm:salute:
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:unsure: from the past,i used to write poems every now and then..but now i am focusing to much more profound activities and that is my studies..i am not like all the poets in this site or like the one you know..i am just typical one who shows emotion on my works..

i like the way it is..thanks for reading though..and goodluck sa imo miga :)

sir ferofax :smack: kuya pio :smack:

:excited: :dance: :yipee::beat::thumbsup:


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Farewell

Farewell to you who once filled me, :hi:
We had our times, now it's goodbye. :sigh:
For whatever its worth, I just want to you know, :)
How grateful I am that our path had crossed. :kiss:

Though things didn't work, :)
The way we thought. :sigh:
At least I know, we tried our best. :thumbsup:
So, as you bury the pieces of the past, :upset:
Think of me for one last time, :smack:
As I turn my back on a love gone wrong. :bye:

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moving on :slap:

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Complaints

Tackless moments,

I think i broke some of my ligaments..

Even though I have comments,

And maybe considered as a compliment..


Hearing your voice,

For s0me it could be a noise..

But frankly its not a choice,

For me to hear it with poise..


Letting you go,

Can be the hardest part..

Which all I can do,

Is to keep y0u forever in my heart..​
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:weep::weep::weep::weep::weep:
 
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