C&C your graphic works

[Masaya]

i've known that one of the best ways to learn in graphic arts is to check your work with others so that you'll know how far you've improved with your work, also to look for mistakes and make room for improvements. so i'll start this thread offering good advice to those who need it. i'll lay simple rules so that this thread would not be flooded with spam.

1. this thread is open to all graphic enthusiast beginners who would like to get their works C & C's.
   
2. Graphic artists (professional or intermediate) are advised to create their own gallery, and would just have their works c & c at their respected threads.
   
3. Graphixers can post sigs, avatars, banners, wallpapers, renders and alike.
   
4. pls. post your graphic work as an image and not as a signature.
   
5. anyone is entitled to post comments here provided that you are objective on commenting their work and not the maker.
   
6. symbianizers, if you like the gfxer's work and cannot say anything else but 'maganda work mo' or alike just press the thanks button.
   
7. post the sig/avatar of the the user you want to comment. if the size is too large then link the image.
   
8. speak nicely when commenting. any violent reactions would result to infractions.
   
9. enjoy its a learning experience.
   
10. do not post works that are not yours.
    
11. do not claim or rip any works that are posted here as yours.

C & C - Comment and Critique

 

[icOn]

master pwede rin ba dito photo manipulation?

 

[Masaya]

yep. graphic works na lang nilagay ko para lahat kasali. its still graphic arts

 

[GSM_BLUE]

pwede ba to???

 

[Masaya]

di ko po makita ang image? ano po yun? yan pong nsa sig? post mo po as image.

 

[GSM_BLUE]

waaahhhh nag hang PC ko kanina pag upload..

ang laki po ng size hindi ko alam kung panu paliitin..

 

[Masaya]

upload mo na lng po imageshack. then post mo po na lang po yung link para di matagal iupload. ok? pakibasa na lang po yung 1st post for more info.

 

[sher]

wow okei po tong thread na to..

okei papost din.. how bout this siggy i'm using:

 

[Masaya]

this ones good, mejo blurred lang po. try sharpening the focus of the sig. then more touch of colors violet and blue.

 

[sher]

wow tnx.. blurry nga, hirap kc pagsamahin ng quality and ung limit ng file size ng siggy dito any suggestions po pano ko mapapaliit file size pwo nndun prin quality without decreasing the width and height?possible ba un? hehe.

 

[icOn]

@ate sher

hmmmmm... try decreasing the dpi ratio. pero ganun din eh, liliit talaga ang image size. PS ba gamit mo mami?

 

[GSM_BLUE]

hindi po talaga ako marunong gumawa ng ganito.. try ko lng po ito

 

[icOn]

ito po yung kay GSM_blue, post ko lang. para di nyo na kelangan i-download yung file para ma-view. ok lang ba sau mr blue?

at ito naman yung works ko, more on photo manipulation kasi ako eh.

simple lang, wala masyadong kung anu-ano.

nakaksira ng view yung basurahan eh, so tinanggal ko.

nilagyan ko ng filter kasi yung angel wings na brush masyadong rough, di maganda tingnan. ang smooth pa naman nung legs ng nasa picture. este, ang smooth pa naman nung picture.

kage-bunshin. sana nga pwede ganito. ang original is yung natutulog. yung dalawang bunshin panay ang pag-aaral.

and this one, i made for a button pin ng store namin.

yun lang, any comments and/or suggestions?

 

[sher]

@ate sher

hmmmmm... try decreasing the dpi ratio. pero ganun din eh, liliit talaga ang image size. PS ba gamit mo mami?

ei kuya icon, wag mo ko i-ate jan
opo PS gamit ko, un lang alam ko gamitin e, hehe..

un nga e, liliit image size binabaan ko quality, aun, blurry kinalabasan..

ok ung basurahan, mukhang tinanggal mo lang tapos pinicturan ulit, haha, galing, linis ng gawa, di halata.

ok sana ung may tatlong tao. kya lang ung sa reflection nung glass table, parang dun mhhlta ung magic,hehe.. pero ang galing, nice idea!!

 

[GSM_BLUE]

thanks icon..

nakakapisak pla ng utak gumawa nyan....

sana ma22 pa ako..

 

[icOn]

hehe nice one mami.

yung sa glass? hmmmmm...sakto yung reflection. ang hindi sakto, yung paa nung natutulog, naputol eh. kanina ko lang rin napansin.

@mr blue

practice lang ng practice papi. kaya mo yan.

 

[Masaya]

wow tnx.. blurry nga, hirap kc pagsamahin ng quality and ung limit ng file size ng siggy dito any suggestions po pano ko mapapaliit file size pwo nndun prin quality without decreasing the width and height?possible ba un? hehe.

65 kb po ang sig limit kaya pa higher .jpeg quality

gsm_blue parang mahirap ata tong siggy na ginawa mo. mashado pong napasobra po yung dark areas mo i suggest play with more opacity para di sya ganun ka dark. for the text ganun din po. try simple effects sa text muna basta blend lang sya around the sig nicely.

guro get a much better brush... maraming wings na brush for ps. na mas maganda tignan. ngadjust ka ata sa based sa wings.

gusto ko to pero mejo blurry yung kamay nya pointing his bunhin's books

bended upper part? , parang kulang yung pagka binat ng i.

 

[GSM_BLUE]

ganun pla boss anachist....

 

[icOn]

hehe tama ka jan master. dapat yung brush ang inadjust ko, hindi yung image.

yung kamay blurry talaga, tried to sharpen it, pero masisira yung "magic" kasi mapansin na may part na parang rough. gumalaw ata kamay nya jan pag-take ng pic.

for the comments master.

 

[K1Lm0r3]

@ate sher

hmmmmm... try decreasing the dpi ratio. pero ganun din eh, liliit talaga ang image size. PS ba gamit mo mami?

suggetion lng po ... nangyari na sa akin yang nag-pixelize ung mga gawa ko... ate sher... bawasan mo po ng konti ung dimensions ng sig mo po para ma-save mo sya ng mas maganda ang quality... gnun ginagawa ko ngyn sa mga gawa ko... ung kina momi jeng sagad ang dimensions kita nyo nmn mejo nag-pixelize.. 400x150 db? try mo po 400x145 or 395x150 basta gnun lng po... ako set ko lng po sya sa quality is 9... turo po skin ni master crazy un...