Poem para sa bestfriend ko..si marites

I just want to share this poem humans..hope u like it ..sarreh for the grammar error

FRIENDS TO STRANGERS

when i first met this girl she was a snob
i already feel the rejection and also out of love
when i saw her in the hallway she doesn't care
i felt so nervous while she's not, and thats not fair

when were still friends and didnt yet admit my feeling
were always happy together and thats i keep on missing
but suddenly change when i told her what i feel
we are not that close anymore and how i wish we are still

i dont know what i have done wrong to treat me like that
i always smile when i see you while you are not
i missed the face that makes my day inspired
the one that gives me strength and also my long desired

she transformed to a person who i do not know
just like the snob girl before that is cold when i first saw
can you please tell me what should i do to take back the past
the time that we are happy and we both wish it will last.​

 

[prettyboyody]

you're right about the grammar..

wag ka sanang ma-offend.. ang dami ngang mali sa grammar mo..

but i guess, it's your first time to make your own poem..

you're doing it right.. just an improvement sa grammar..

dictionary could be a big help..

and while you feel inlove.. gumawa ka ng gumawa ng tula ing your free time..

ang sarap ng feeling.. dumaan din ako sa ganyan eh.. high school and college..

ngayon nakahiyaan ko na.. baka may makabasa lalo na sa mga kasama ko sa bahay..

aalaskahin lang ako..

good luck.!