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Poem Rachiersh's Poems

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:D Rachiersh aka br0ken0id :D​


My List of Poems and Its Links :naughty:
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[2007]​

[2008]​

A Place in Me | Setting My Heart Free | As You Say Goodbye| I'm in Love with YOU | It's YOU
I did it All for YOU (Part 1) | I did it All for YOU (Part 2) | Sleepy | Forgive Me | Glad to have You
Finally | Secret Crush | Gift | Unexpectedly | Hidden Feeling | Unknown Feeling | Disappointed
Celebration | We Can Dominate | Extraordinary | Cococrunch | Bleeding Through | Let's Not say Goodbye
Sacrifice | Hard | Not a Happy Ending | Left Alone | Prisoner | Waiting | Why | Demerge
Brokenoid by Dagupanice | Malas | Beside You | Jealous cow by Jhetcola | Life | Lie | Regrets
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[2009 - 2010]​

You Don't Know | Out of the Blue | Alive (A Response) by Ryuk08
Graduation | Confused | Blind | The Way Around | New Phase | Farewell
No Reason | The Gift | Poet's Joy | Dear You | Prisoner in Me | Lies
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[2011 - 2018]​

Creations by HIM | Memory | Abrupt | Inception | I Don't Remember
Losing Myself | Green | Sad | Red | Fading Away | Think | Deficient
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[2022]​

 
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ngaun ko lang binasa mga poem mo ganda din pala lhat!!!!:pacute:
 
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By reading some of the poems I therefore conclude that no one can love you the most but yourself and I will follow this saying of mine..
 
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vengefulspirit said:
ngaun ko lang binasa mga poem mo ganda din pala lhat!!!!:pacute:
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:pacute: :thanks: cutie venge :blush: :giggle:

wakokocrunch said:
hehehe vengeful...ganda tlga noh! :D
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:smack: :thanks: f0r believing in my art 0f writing sir albert..

per0 kaw pa rin id0l k0 :praise: :excited:

vandike said:
wala lang..:D nyaahaahahha.. :smack:
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:noidea: ganun :slap:

kapaw88 said:
By reading some of the poems I therefore conclude that no one can love you the most but yourself and I will follow this saying of mine..
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:thanks: :smack: :yes: tama ka nga kapawie :smack:

per0 please :pray: d0n't ever say "i theref0re c0nclude" :slap:

:off: :missyou:
 
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Unknown Feeling

As I left some problems at home,
It made me think that its my time to bloom,
Not to forget it,
But to absorb and to keep..

Hoping to talk to you,
But instead I' m looking forward not to,
'Cause I don't know what to do,
Even just for a clue..

They said, I must enjoy the trip,
Not thinking about you or do some flip
They evoked that tip,
In order for me not weep..

Cherishing people is my weakness,
And not granting promises is not at my premises,
But I assure you that its true,
Even if I feel so d*mn blue..
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:thanks: again sir albert :D :giggle: c0rrect my p0ems ah :slap:
 
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heheheh no need to correct your poems :) they are already jewels as they are :)
 
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Brokie nabasa ko na mga poems mo...

Hmmmm... I see some kinda pattern sa mga nasulat mo... parang nagpapatama, pero sino naman kaya ang tinatamaan...

Well if you have a feeling inside na gusto mong ayusin ang works mo, do it, its all part of being a writer... revising to make the message clear... Or for any reason for that matter, don't hold back oki?
 
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wakokocrunch said:
heheheh no need to correct your poems :) they are already jewels as they are :)
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:smack: :thanks: sir :slap: feel k0 kasi pag nababasa m0 na..

may mali na agad :ashamed: :slap:

asher said:
Brokie nabasa ko na mga poems mo...

Hmmmm... I see some kinda pattern sa mga nasulat mo... parang nagpapatama, pero sino naman kaya ang tinatamaan...

Well if you have a feeling inside na gusto mong ayusin ang works mo, do it, its all part of being a writer... revising to make the message clear... Or for any reason for that matter, don't hold back oki?
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:slap: patay.. :ashamed: :sigh: 0p0..ak0 na nga lang :giggle:
:pacute: per0 sir albert pr0mised t0 d0 it f0r me..j0ke.. :giggle:

:pacute: lagi kasi ak0ng ganun aserinder0 :D

dun ak0 magaling..sa mga ta0ng hindi manhid nga lang..:slap:

:whistle: marami p0 ak0ng pinatatamaan..

example..

*crush :blush:
*s0me0ne that i will hate f0rever :rant:
*a l0ved 0ne [take n0te..l0ved..] :lol:
*a friend.. :buddy:
*nature :D

:ashamed:
 
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Mahal Na Araw Na Naman



Ah! Mahal na araw na naman
Ginugunita ang pagpapakasakit sa ating mga kasalanan
Nang Panginoong Hesus na nabayubay sa krus
Upang kasalanan ko, nating lahat ay matubos.

Panginoon maraming salamat
Sa pag-ibig mong sa aming lahat
Buhay mo'y iyong ibinuhos
Upang kami'y lumaya ng lubos.

Ngayong aming ginugunita
Ang araw kung saan namatay ka
Amin sanang maalala
Ang pasakit na iyong ginawa.

Sa buhay naming ito
Nagbuhat lahat sa iyo
Nawa'y magamit namin ng husto
At tatandaan namin ang wagas na pag-ibig mo.
 
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:slap: :thanks: f0r the p0em br0.. :thumbsup:
:think: gawa ka na lang kaya ng sarili m0ng thead?? :D :giggle:
 
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br0ken0id said:


:smack: :thanks: sir :slap: feel k0 kasi pag nababasa m0 na..

may mali na agad :ashamed: :slap:



:slap: patay.. :ashamed: :sigh: 0p0..ak0 na nga lang :giggle:
:pacute: per0 sir albert pr0mised t0 d0 it f0r me..j0ke.. :giggle:

:pacute: lagi kasi ak0ng ganun aserinder0 :D

dun ak0 magaling..sa mga ta0ng hindi manhid nga lang..:slap:

:whistle: marami p0 ak0ng pinatatamaan..

example..

*crush :blush:
*s0me0ne that i will hate f0rever :rant:
*a l0ved 0ne [take n0te..l0ved..] :lol:
*a friend.. :buddy:
*nature :D

:ashamed:
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Naku walang mali sa pagsulat, "it's the expression of ones soul" ayokong isipin mo na may mali ka na agad "don't let yourself be antagonist of your self".

Kaya nga "write" malapit sa word na "right" meaning tama. So don't stop writing cause it's right!

dicken123456 said:
Mahal Na Araw Na Naman



Ah! Mahal na araw na naman
Ginugunita ang pagpapakasakit sa ating mga kasalanan
Nang Panginoong Hesus na nabayubay sa krus
Upang kasalanan ko, nating lahat ay matubos.

Panginoon maraming salamat
Sa pag-ibig mong sa aming lahat
Buhay mo'y iyong ibinuhos
Upang kami'y lumaya ng lubos.

Ngayong aming ginugunita
Ang araw kung saan namatay ka
Amin sanang maalala
Ang pasakit na iyong ginawa.

Sa buhay naming ito
Nagbuhat lahat sa iyo
Nawa'y magamit namin ng husto
At tatandaan namin ang wagas na pag-ibig mo.
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It's nice to see someone writing something bout faith... Maganda to bro, dapat gumawa ka ng sarili mong thread.
 
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asher said:
Naku walang mali sa pagsulat, "it's the expression of ones soul" ayokong isipin mo na may mali ka na agad "don't let yourself be antagonist of your self".

Kaya nga "write" malapit sa word na "right" meaning tama. So don't stop writing cause it's right!

It's nice to see someone writing something bout faith... Maganda to bro, dapat gumawa ka ng sarili mong thread.
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:pacute: 0p0 my dearest critic man :praise:

:smack: at gumawa ka pa talaga ng sarili m0ng v0cabulary ah :giggle:

:think: tama nga naman :more: gawa ka na ng thread m0 :D
 
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br0ken0id said:


:pacute: 0p0 my dearest critic man :praise:

:smack: at gumawa ka pa talaga ng sarili m0ng v0cabulary ah :giggle:

:think: tama nga naman :more: gawa ka na ng thread m0 :D
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Critic man talaga... :slap:

Hehe nagkataon lang...

Thread? you mean critic thread?
 
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:slap: :giggle: syempre.. :naughty: suki ka na sa list k0 ng mga names :D

:D hindi p0 kaw..si dicken p0 ang tinutuk0y k0 :D
 
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br0ken0id said:


:smack: :thanks: sir :slap: feel k0 kasi pag nababasa m0 na..

may mali na agad :ashamed: :slap:



:slap: patay.. :ashamed: :sigh: 0p0..ak0 na nga lang :giggle:
:pacute: per0 sir albert pr0mised t0 d0 it f0r me..j0ke.. :giggle:

:pacute: lagi kasi ak0ng ganun aserinder0 :D

dun ak0 magaling..sa mga ta0ng hindi manhid nga lang..:slap:

:whistle: marami p0 ak0ng pinatatamaan..

example..

*crush :blush:
*s0me0ne that i will hate f0rever :rant:
*a l0ved 0ne [take n0te..l0ved..] :lol:
*a friend.. :buddy:
*nature :D

:ashamed:
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Of course i would dear :D
No problem to that :)
Still, you go express yourself naturally :) That is always the best expression of yourself. :)
 
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wakokocrunch said:
Of course i would dear :D
No problem to that :)
Still, you go express yourself naturally :) That is always the best expression of yourself. :)
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:giggle: yan ang gust0 k0 say0 sir..

binibil0g m0 ul0 k0.. :laugh:

:D :wub: u sir..y0u are the best :giggle:

:pray: sana teacher kita :weep:
 
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By reading your poems I got inspired...
Rescued my spirit buried inside...
Opened my eyes to poetry again...
Kneeling down to you, I can step everything aside...
Even if mountains fall down, and undesired posts...
Never give up sharing your thoughts...
Of course tons of people loves your work...
I'm one of them... a fan of yours...
Dreams can be made from poetry of brokenoid...

:thumbsup:
 
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