Poem Ketchup's Poetry in Motion (UPDATE Feb. 14, '18) "Pumapag-ibig"

My Poetry in Motion


1. Friends

2. Fate

3. Frame

4. Far Behind

5. For My Mom

6. Hiling

7. Holiday

8. Face

9. Duyan

10. Pumapag-ibig

http://www.symbianize.com/showthread.php?t=153602&page=9&p=23291344&viewfull=1#post23291344



SETTING: first poem ko dito sa symbianize ..na-inspired akong gumawa dahil kay seven kasi kala ko puro inum lang alam nya.. deep din pala si loko

heto..

F R I E N D S

friends can come at any given time..
they can be jolly, they can be mime..
turning your back is not really an option..
because for you.. damn.. they worth more than a nation..


you can feel comfort when they are around..
they always check when you are safe and sound..
regardless of their race, status or color..
they stood up for you.. time and time before..


for someone they can be just a person..
but for you, there’s lot more reason..
staying with them through night and day..
because for you.. "i love them" that’s all you can say..


gaining friends is not really hard..
keeping them is what you should look forward..
having one is really a dream come true..
because they can teach you a thing or two..


friends can come at any given place..
they can even find you when you are at a maze..
because friends can come at any size..
its true.. i just found them here at symbianize..


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[ketchup009]

Re: Try ko lang gumawa.. eheh!

maris thanks!

inspired naman palage.. tamad lang gumawa

thanks again

 

[qtrose_16]

Re: Ketchup's Poetry in Motion

Ketch napa talaga ako sa second poem mo.. Ramdam yung inspiration mo sa paggawa ng poem.. Every words may pinapadama nailabas mo ang emotions mo.. galing

 

[ketchup009]

Re: Ketchup's Poetry in Motion

thanks sa compliments rose

 

[ketchup009]

Re: Ketchup's Poetry in Motion

SETTING: daming compliment kaya medyo ginanahang gumawa .. bakit kaya puro letter "F" nagstart..?

F R A M E

Many things can be seen on a frame
Some are fun but none of them is lame
Relatives, colleagues and friends
They share the same glass, the same ends


There you can see your ageless parents
Beautiful smiles that reminds you of their scents
For you it’s a treasure you want to embrace
Because they’re the ones who taught you to lace


There you can laugh at your bully brother
And get classic with your beloved grandmother
Because you know it runs in the family
The wit, the talent and humility


One moment you’re just laughing and then there’s sigh
Tear drops; you just can’t hide no matter how you try
You’re missing them, your old friends
As the communication slowly descends


Frame really reminds us a lot of memories
Different person, authentic stories
Because for you they’re just waiting
For you to come back and start staring

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[iambellie]

Re: Ketchup's Poetry in Motion

jep isa ka na palang manunulat

at dahil dyan +rep

feeling mod nanaman ako sige +thanks pala

keep it up!! share ka lang ng share


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[ketchup009]

Re: Ketchup's Poetry in Motion

belle salamat sa pagbasa..

dahil dyan +infrac ka saken.. juk lang

 

[Jhet]

Re: Ketchup's Poetry in Motion

grabe!
may tinatago din ang isang ito.
ayus yan at i-express ang nararamdaman.
Friends talaga lang ha, galing nung pagkagawa mo nyan.

 

[ketchup009]

Re: Ketchup's Poetry in Motion

thanks adam

 

[qtrose_16]

Re: Ketchup's Poetry in Motion

galing ketch

 

[Rachiersh]

Re: Ketchup's Poetry in Motion

aba aba



at nawili ka pa talagang puro "F" ang title ah

eto naman for you

as I read your creations,
I felt the passion,
the urge that you have,
equivalent to a clap.

first was about companions,
second was with deep emotions,
and the last was a polygon.

I don't know what to say,
maybe a thank you for sharing,
is all I can think of for a pay.



on the spot yan ah





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[ketchup009]

Re: Ketchup's Poetry in Motion


hang galing galing mo naman kekok

isa kang alamat

 

[Jhet]

Re: Ketchup's Poetry in Motion

ketch
tutal sa "f" ka nagsimula, try mo itong title na suggest ko.
Far Behind try mo lang kung kaya.

 

[ketchup009]

Re: Ketchup's Poetry in Motion

naku adam mukhang mahirap yan a

sige try kong gumawa..

 

[Jhet]

Re: Ketchup's Poetry in Motion

kaya mo yan dude, di yan mahirap malalim lang.
sink in konti para maka-relate ng maigi.

 

[Rachiersh]

Re: Ketchup's Poetry in Motion

challenge yan

sa title maghuhugot ng maiisulat like i always do



kaya yan kekok

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[Jhet]

Re: Ketchup's Poetry in Motion

br0ken
salamat na-inspire mo din ketch sa poem na reply mu.
mas lalong gaganahan.

 

[mactal27]

Re: Ketchup's Poetry in Motion

kua jep. ^^ haha. ang ganda. ^^ hehe. ^^

 

[ketchup009]

Re: Ketchup's Poetry in Motion

kekok
sana nga makaya

adam
ge tol try ko

lovely
thanks

 

[creepyicebox]

Re: Ketchup's Poetry in Motion



aba aba!! tumutula ka rin pala catsoup

ako, di ko pa na-update yung poem thread ko pati yung mbs channel tsk tsk

i especially like your message in this one

F R A M E

Many things can be seen on a frame
Some are fun but none of them is lame
Relatives, colleagues and friends
They share the same glass, the same ends


There you can see your ageless parents
Beautiful smiles that reminds you of their scents
For you it’s a treasure you want to embrace
Because they’re the ones who taught you to lace


There you can laugh at your bully brother
And get classic with your beloved grandmother
Because you know it runs in the family
The wit, the talent and humility


One moment you’re just laughing and then there’s sigh
Tear drops; you just can’t hide no matter how you try
You’re missing them, your old friends
As the communication slowly descends


Frame really reminds us a lot of memories
Different person, authentic stories
Because for you they’re just waiting
For you to come back and start staring

prang kanta ng Nickleback na ang title Photograph nakakaiyak..



pero bat nga ba puro sa Letter "F" nagsa-start mga poems mo

 

[ketchup009]

Re: Ketchup's Poetry in Motion

uy cielo

hewan ko nga rin ba kung bakit
ako napapatula.. sinisipon kasi ako

catsoup namiss ko yan bigla

hindi ko rin lam kung bakit puro "F"
yan nag-start..

buti naman nagustuhan mo rin yang Frame..
naisip ko yung concept nyan habang naglalakad
pauwi galing sa bahay ni gf...