The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wrote)

The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wrote)

Just something that got out...

Well, actually some "things". I'll be using this thread to write my poems,
hoping somebody might like them.

Hmm... the views tick on. I wonder if someone really reads this. ^__^

yay, so glad somebody likes the poems. Thanks po!

I'll do my best to make more.

EDIT:
Well since I managed to make more after 2 years It's time I made things a bit simpler to look for.

Isn't it
Short
Rush
Faces
Loneliness
Bakit
The Failure
Paalam
Wisdom
Live
Goodbye Sadness
I see his blood
Searching
Crimony
Take two
Blocked
Acronyms
Faux Pas
Fight
Paslit
Focus
Takbuhan
Insomnia
X
Impromptu
Limericks
Takbo
Pangako
Love Poem
Alitaptap
Vulnerable
Oedipus
Self-destruction
Ordeal

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[Sankaturyo]

Re: The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wr

Isn't it

Isn't it happy to just be lonely
With no one to bother your thoughts?
To be engulfed in silence
In perfect innocence
From the worlds most darkest faults

Isn't it happy to just be lonely
With no one corrupting my dreams
To be resting easily
Lying more comfortably
In a kingdom only you could see

Isn't it happy to just be lonely
With no one breaking your heart
To be saved from sadness
And perfect madness
No matter how lonely you'll be.

 

[Sankaturyo]

Re: The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wr

Short

The same old feeling
Of being lost in a dream
Of hearing silence
Of silence singing

The sound of a whisper
Not more than an echo
Not more than a lifter
Of my souls sorrow

And as I weep
In my binding grief
I come back to this feeling
The same old feeling
Of being lost in a dream.

 

[Sankaturyo]

Re: The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wr

Rush

I look into your eyes
Your eyes that talk to mine
Your eyes that fill the skies
With love that is so fine
Your eyes that stop the rain
That which tears us apart
You always take the pain
Far away from my heart
And now it comes to pass
That my love grows more
So here you are at last
Knocking on my door
And as I see your eyes with love so endless
It is then that I bathe now in perfect happiness

 

[Sankaturyo]

Re: The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wr


Faces

I draw your face into my mind
Each feature soft and kind
Within each line I try to bind
These feelings I cant find

I try to close my eyes once more
To a distant mem'ry long before
My mind seals all except one door
I race towards it across the floor

And as I enter that only room
I feel around a touch of gloom
The happiness and smiles swept like a broom
A single soul bound by doom

A ball of hope I cannot see
No way to find that memory
Your face fades slowly escaping me
I cry and wish love sets me free

 

[Sankaturyo]

Re: The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wr


Loneliness

I sit alone in a cold dark room
Boarded windows painted white
Yellow sunlight passes through
Shows a gloom no end in sight

I sit alone in a cold dark room
Nauseous winds clutching to my face
Grief and sadness add to gloom
Guilt and worry lead the race

The seats are empty inside my room
No one to comfort the fool who's sick
No one to cry when Death comes claiming
My own clock slows its tick

And where are you? the one who promised,
To care for me and ease my mind
As I lay silent weak and broken
You turn and leave me far behind.

 

[Sankaturyo]

Re: The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wr

Bakit

Bakit sa tuwing ako'y mananalangin
Ika'y nakikita sa gitna ng dilim
Ako'y dinadala sa ibang lupain
Upang makita ang liwanag at lisanin ang dilim

Bakit sa tuwing ikay nakikita
Ang iyong mga matang kay ganda-ganda
Ang iyong mga labing puno ng ligaya
Ang aking puso'y napupuno ng saya

Bakit sa tuwing ako'y madarapa
Ika'y lumalapit nakangiti at payapa
Ako'y nangingiti napapawi ang luha
Mahal na nga kita wag ka sanang mawala

Ngunit...
Bakit sa tuwing ako'y magsasabi
Ng aking damdamin para sa'yo binibini
Ako'y nagigising nawawalay sa 'yong tabi
Ang pangarap nababalot sa dilim ng gabi.

 

[Sankaturyo]

Re: The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wr

The Failure

I miss the times when you were mine
when I was happy and you were fine

I miss the days when love was ours
when the sun shone brightly upon birds and flowers

I miss the songs you taught to me
Your lovely thoughts Ideas free

And how I wish you were with me
Inside this cell that you left me
My heart grows cold my body weary
Oh! how I wish you'll come back to me

I watch you now within the shadows
Our forgotten past and lingering woes
The darkness comes, my heartache grows
My body withers, it dies and flows.

 

[funkson666]

Re: The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wr

i love the FACES...thanks - nice one!

 

[janz13]

Re: The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wr

Isn't it

Isn't it happy to just be lonely
With no one to bother your thoughts?
To be engulfed in silence
In perfect innocence
From the worlds most darkest faults

Isn't it happy to just be lonely
With no one corrupting my dreams
To be resting easily
Lying more comfortably
In a kingdom only you could see

Isn't it happy to just be lonely
With no one breaking your heart
To be saved from sadness
And perfect madness
No matter how lonely you'll be.

Ganyan din ang gusto ko most of the time..

 

[Sankaturyo]

Re: The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wr

Paalam

Siguro mahirap nga
Na iwanan kita
Kaibigan sa aking tabi
Lagi kong nakakasama

Lagi kong nakikita
Ang iyong magandang mukha
Ang iyong pagaaruga
Ang iyong mabait na luha

Sana bukas, pagdating ng umaga
Kapag wala na ang anino ng tadhana
Ay makita kitang nakangiti, masaya
Gising sa ilalim ng buhay na ligaya

 

[Sankaturyo]

Re: The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wr

Wisdom

I miss my little Hija
I miss your slightest touch
And though I cannot write no more
I'll try to write this much

I wish to see your pretty face
To touch your soft warm skin
I want to hear your heavenly voice
That fills me from within

The times that pass without you here
It gives me but a sigh
I wish to feel your warm embrace
A kiss with no goodbye

I want to be with you forever
Spend eternity in a day
But it just isn't possible
For someone's taken you away.

 

[Sankaturyo]

Re: The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wr

Live

Try hard and reach for your goal
Destroy the ones that burned your soul
Eliminate the ones that bound your heart
Annihilate the race that tore you apart

Try hard and reach for your goal
To the certain goodness of being alone
To the all seen love of hearing a song
Behind the raindrops that drowned your home

Try hard and reach for your goal
Set forth on a journey to mend your soul
Traverse on a quest to unbind your heart
And save me from pain that tears me apart.

 

[Sankaturyo]

Re: The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wr

Goodbye Sadness

I felt in love when I'm with you
I cherished it because I love you
You never repay whatever I do
You just stayed the same doing what you do

It hurt me so that you had to go
No matter how hard I let you go
I thought you loved me, now I know
I thought you were for me, it wasn't so.

Until one day when I met her
My heart becomes happy when we're together
She gave what I lost, and I loved her
She's perfect for me and i'm perfect for her

She gave me love that was so endless
And I know now it's goodbye sadness...

 

[Sankaturyo]

Re: The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wr

I see his blood

I see his blood upon the rose
The rose which autumn dewdrops wet
The blood in winter snow has lain
The snow in summer melts in vain

I see my blood upon the rose
The blood that courses ice cold veins
My throat now cut by bloody blades
My body weeping dying shame

I saw your blood upon the rose
Across the grounds that you have lain
The grass grows bitter, the flowers feign
The trees forever cry in pain

I saw his blood upon the rose
And now the rose drops that blood
For now the rose forever lies
Upon a sea, a sea of blood

 

[andrewmoquin]

Re: The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wr

I love your poems especially the "faces" and "the failure" .
I the message of the two poems. It is more about life and challenge.
I really love it. Thanks for sharing!

 

[Sankaturyo]

Re: The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wr


Searching

I need someone to talk to me
To share opinions and tragedy
To take my time and make me see
What this life has in store for me

I need someone to hold me close
To tell me some things no one knows
To share her life the way she chose
A precious lily beside the rose

I need someone that I'd care for
When all the good times go out the door
I'll never make her feel sad and sore
Each day that passes I'll love her more

I truly thought I needed you
But you just broke my heart in two.

 

[adiksadownload]

Re: The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wr

Thanks nga po pala dun sa pag feedback mo sa post ko, yung anatomy and physiology of love. Kaya pala naappreciate mo, kasi nagsusulat ka din pala ng poems.Hehe.. Nice poh.

 

[Sankaturyo]

Re: The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wr

Crimony

Tick'
Tock'
Goes the clock
I'm waiting, sitting beside the dock
Waiting on this door to unlock
Until it opens I sit here stuck

Beeps!
Horns!
The cars go on
A noisy melody, a restless song
Waiting for a jeepney to take me home
It sucks when you're waiting all alone

Ring !!
Ring !!
The telephone sings
It's not from my house, it's a neighbor thing
When you live in apartments where walls are thin
You'll hear everything, the shrieking & moanin'

Tick'
Tock'
The clock is stuck
I wake with a jolt, my alarm didn't struck
Another day of monotony, another day with no luck
Nothing else to say except WHAT THE F**K!

 

[Khulett08]

Re: The first Place i'd rather be... The last Place i'd like to be... (something I wr

I really like ur poems.. Specially the FACES and ISNT IT.. Ü keep up the good work bro ü